A Good First Attempt but features all the pitfalls of amateur writers
Melissa Diaz's debut novel, BREE, is not "bad" per say, but it isn't great either. What could have been a thrill ride, and definitely the start of something quite intriguing falls short, plagued by many first-time author pitfalls. The overuse of adjectives, odd sentence structure, and poor grammar choices distract the reader from a story which at its core is very interesting. An avid reader of fantasy and sci-fi I believe that Melissa has a successful writing career in her future, she just needs to realize less is more. While I do look forward to her upcoming sequel, many readers may not have the tolerance or patience for the inconsistent quality of writing within the book. I will say this, when Diaz is on the money she is fantastic, but when she is off it definitely hits an all time low. All I can say is give the book a chance, there is a great story to be told and I believe there is a solid market for her series.
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Overview
Bree Rannon is a teenage girl growing up on a farm in Isley. She feels she is the oddest person she knows. Strange things seem to happen when she's around. When she is compelled by an unseen force into a dark forest not far from her home, she shadows into a world that's just as odd as she is. While in her new world, Thrae, she discovers she has a wealth of magical and telepathic abilities just waiting to be unleashed. But how will she cope when she finds the parents she has loved her whole life are not her blood? Bree struggles with heartache, love and death along her way before she discovers who "she" really is. Will she fall prey to an evil force that would see her dead at all costs? Or...