Some problems with the heroine, but a good YA high fantasy overall
Sydelle's village has gone ten years without rain, but one day when the whole kingdom is in turmoil--the king has died leaving no heir and an inexperienced young queen, and two neighboring kingdoms may be about to attack--a stranger appears and makes rain pour from the skies. North is a young wizard and when Sydelle's dad, the town elder, offers North anything he wants as payment for the rain, North chooses Sydelle. And thus begins a high fantasy Journey Story, with North and Sydelle trying to reach the capital city and save the kingdom, all while being chased by an evil dark wizard, plagued by inclement weather, and frustrated by each other's personal shortcomings.
Sydelle is a nice strong heroine who's at least as skilled as her wizard companion, but in different ways. She's an excellent weaver, and she must have some latent magical ability because she can mend North's magic cloaks without spoiling their power. In one town where North is finding wizarding work, Sydelle finds work of her own when she needs some money, which shows great initiative. She did have a few less than wonderful behaviors, though--she stays mad at North for most of the first half of the book, and she keeps running away from him when he says or does the wrong thing. Now, coming along with him wasn't her choice, but he didn't kidnap her--her parents are the ones who sent her with him, and he actually saved her from an impending attack on her village, so even if he's a bit of a jerk at times, it doesn't seem to be in her best interest to keep walking out on her only protector. Sydelle makes a few very unsmart moves, like one time when North is getting into a fight and he clearly doesn't want his opponent to know that he has magical power, but Sydelle turns to him and basically says out loud, "North, you're a wizard, aren't you? Use your magic."
North was my favorite character, and I excuse his occasional loutish behavior by telling myself that though he gets drunk a few times, he has terribly good reasons for it, and though he doesn't always handle Sydelle's emotions with finesse, his missteps mostly happen because he wants her approval. After she finally runs away for real, he's devastated, and the two of them come to an understanding--she'll stop running and he'll stop being a jerk. No matter what they're doing, North and Sydelle's interaction is fun to watch, and he gets his share of witty lines. When North steps inbetween Sydelle and a man she's trading insults with, the man asks North,
"You interrupt my business?...Do you know what this wench just accused my of being?"
"A filthy pig," North said good-naturedly. "But there's only one filthy pig allowed in her life, and the position's been filled." (pg 44)
One small problem: maybe it's because I was reading an ARC copy, but it seemed like there were a lot of places in Brightly Woven where the transitions needed smoothing. Sometimes I felt like a phrase or sentence was missing, and I had to re-read small sections to be sure what happened. But overall, the environment is convincingly drawn, there are a few really good twists (each new revelation about North's past or Sydelle abilities is more shocking than the last), and lots of adventurousness, which should make the story work well for Mid-Grade readers, though it's classified as YA.
Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback.
Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.