Broken: (The Relationship Poems)

Broken: (The Relationship Poems)

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by Yari Garcia
     
 

17 Poems that bled out of me after some bad relationships.

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17 Poems that bled out of me after some bad relationships.

Product Details

ISBN-13:
2940011477898
Publisher:
Yari Garcia
Publication date:
07/02/2011
Sold by:
Smashwords
Format:
NOOK Book
Sales rank:
641,721
File size:
82 KB

Meet the Author

Hai! I'm Yari Garcia, also known around the web as Moody Thursday. I'm a writer of young adult fiction of all kinds. I live in the awesome state of Texas, where I work at a book store and love to write my short stories. I am currently working on two full-length novels, so I'm very excited!! :-D Check out my free e-books: they include poetry, short stories, and flash-fiction. Many hugs, Yari Garcia aka Moody Thursday (/ (/ (&hat;_&hat;) c(")(")

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Broken: (The Relationship Poems) 3.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 20 reviews.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Most of this you can feel and some of this can be true in this rough life
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
I liked this book. It's very personal, almost as if reading a diary. Most of it I don't quite understand completely but it doesn't matter too much because all I have to know is what feelings are trying to be explained. I recommend this book to those looking for something short and sweet.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
I try NOT to be critical of young or unconventional poets. I write poetry, and 99 times out of 100 it is hit or miss. It goes with the territory. However, there is a difference between being unconventional and being UNINSPIRED. Poet to poet, I can tell the difference when someone is being genuine and speaking truth, or when what they're writiing is just ink on the page, in other words, they are writing just for writing's sake, or speaking just to be heard. It's painful to hear and even more painful to say. Obviously, the author is young, so I'll cut her a break for her inexperience. However, I would suggest deeper emotional introspection and healthy inner self editing would create more resonating and honest results. For inspiration, I would read other authors and perhaps open yourself to music by bands and individuals who lean deeply toward lyrical content as opposed to just writing songs. Better yet, try finding one song whose lyrics are pure. You'll know you've found it when every word, every turn of phrase, every emotional moment goes through your ears, into your brain, and RESONATES like a drum beat, a pulse, or a vibration in your body. Take that feeling, sit with it awhile, think about WHY it resonates, then channel it in your poetry in your own unique way! It works. I would also suggest disconnecting from things like network TV, daily news, and social networking, which can act as distractions and introduce negative noise and confusion into your creative process. Read books that nourish your soul and your mind, spend time in nature, soak in art and music, and engage in activites which help you hone in to your inner voice. Then, no matter how unconventional your technique is, your words will carry you and spread because what you're writing is true and honest, to your audience AND to yourself. Hope this helps and is not too harsh.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Loved the poems
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
These poems were cute. I prefer poems that rhyme some, but these were really good.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Lol
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Add me
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Nice. I would have said that also.
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Nobody want o know ur horny bc thts nasty s go fck ur mom or wait yoy ready did that didnt you?! Nasty douche bag...
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Is this just poems? I like poems just there not my favorite thing to read. Is this worth the read if i am ok with some poems just not the whole stort poems? Someone help in my situation wat should i do? - In need of help
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Not the best but readable
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Good.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
It was nice. Had some really good poems. Keep up the good work!
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
WHAT about your cool aid? Tsk tsk
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
About to get soooo waz up miggas u be trippen in my kool aid
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Hi