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Can a bullet ease the pain? If one fails to do the job, will more suffice?
Posted June 7, 2014
My two stars are generous but I'm assuming the writer is a young person who needs encouragement. Work on developing a sense of place, character, real dialogue, maybe even some imagery, rather than just exposition. Short writing can be powerful as indicated by NPR's short short story contests. But it's not easy. Introducing a sense of irony will make your writing far more relatable.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted February 5, 2013