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Posted September 30, 2013
Stories recealing the inside workings of an awkward girl's mind take some serious insight. When written by a man, the motivation tends to lose some depth. I think this main character would be well-received by men, since Charlie is the stereotypical epitomy of gamer-geek girl. But as light romance aimed at women, it falls a bit short. Too many stereotypes, an infusion of originality would really help this story.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted August 7, 2013
I was really hoping that Charley would become a faerie. But the book is very realistic because I have been in the same tight spot. I'm glad they were not afraid to mention facebook and Lolcatz.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted July 7, 2013
Posted May 9, 2013
I suspect that this is the authors first writing to see to completion. It needs some editing, but overall, not bad. Give it a shot, its free after all.
Pros: Fun story, easy read.
Some issues with sentences switching from first person narration to second person narration.
I'm not sure the author has actually played online games, such as WOW. Maybe it has just been too over simplified, in an attempt to be understandable to a non geeky reader. Internet references are about 5 to 7 years out of date. I actually went back to check the publish date for this story. [I dont think I have seen anyone use "A/S/L" since AIM fell out of use.]