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Anonymous
Posted October 24, 2012
This book has a interesting story, but is so poorly written it made my eyes hurt and head pound! Really, need to find an editor. Will not read another book from this author.
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Posted July 15, 2012
The book sounded really interesting but was a real disappointment. There was a lot of bad grammar throughout the story and even had a person's name at the end of the book that had died in the beginning. The story line was good but could have been shortened a lot and it seemed to repeat stuff over and over. The biggest disappointment was the fact that the book ended without ever going into detail about what happened. It was if the author couldn't figure out what to write next so she just ended it.
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Posted July 9, 2012
To good for words on of the best books i have ever read i loved the length for i can read exceptionally fast and need long books to keep me busy for a while. Awesome book can't wait for more by this author :)
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Posted July 8, 2012
This book is a love story with lots of sadness and suspense....
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted July 7, 2012
Just like I said A total waste of time.... I will give it one star because it was free
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Posted July 4, 2012
This book has a good plot, but is full of mistakes, typos, grammatical errors, using the wrong names. It made the book hard to read.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted June 28, 2012
This is a nice story with an interesting plot line. The grammatic errors were incredibly distracting, however. A good editor could have caught the mistakes (such as 'curse of your marriage' instead of 'course of your marriage'). A better edit would also have tightened up some of the story. There was very little explanation of characters and relationships. Also, the writer didn't have a clue about the legal process.
Again, the idea was a good one, but execution could have been better. I'd love to read more by this author after a professional editor did their thing.
1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted December 1, 2012
The story's concept was very intriguing. However, the errors in the storyline itself in addition to the grammatical errors made the 758 pages drag on and on. My biggest beefs were
1. Characters were not introduced, they were just... there.
2. Serious timeline issues.
3. Confusing and incorrect explanations for the legal issues.
4. Poor transistions (i.e. from person to person, place to place and subject to subject).
Overall, this seemed like a first draft of a first book. I gave it one star for being free and another because I liked the overall concept.
Anonymous
Posted August 20, 2012
I loved this book from begining to end.
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Posted July 17, 2012
Author does a great job putting love adventure together just a great story
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Posted July 13, 2012
Free read it was ok, but I don't think I would read anything else from this author
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Posted July 12, 2012
Excellent. I've found another favorite author to follow!
0 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted July 2, 2012
Love story of how two people meant to be together will come together in the end.
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Posted June 17, 2012
Great story....700+ pages...twist and turns....
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Posted June 16, 2012
This was pretty good..... Way longer than I thought it would be, 758 pages.
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Posted July 17, 2012
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Posted October 17, 2012
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Posted July 19, 2012
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Posted July 28, 2012
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Posted March 19, 2013
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