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"What do you see?" he repeated softly.
"Evan." She licked her lips. For the first time in her life she forced herself to concentrate on her vision. Despite the fire, the cabin was cold. The breath of the two figures condensed as they spoke, hanging in the air like smoke. Beyond the cabin confines, the wind howled, rattling windows she couldn't see.
"Tell me what else you see."
"It feels like snow." Chill fingers of air crept around her, and she shivered.
"Do you see any people?"
"Two. Male, female." The woman had long hair that she brushed away with a cat's paw. "She has claws. Cat's claws."
"Are they talking? Can you hear what they're saying?"
"Only the woman speaks." And though her voice was soft, its mellow sound stung Maddie's ears, as grating as fingernails across a blackboard.
"What is she saying?"
"I don't know."
"Listen harder. Concentrate on the sound of her voice."
Jon squeezed her hand, running warmth through her body. She licked her lips, trying to do as he asked. Like a radio suddenly tuned, the woman's voice leapt into focus, and she told Jon, "She plans an attack. Tonight."
"Who does she plan to attack?"
"I don't know--" She hesitated.
The woman turned. There was malice on her face, malice in the air, so thick Maddie suddenly struggled to breathe. Jon called her name urgently, but he sounded so very far away. She stared at the woman with the vibrant green eyes until they all but filled her vision, became a turbulent ocean awash with venom.
"You are mine," the woman spat. "Mine."
Maddie screamed, and the dream disintegrated into darkness.
Posted August 17, 2014
Posted June 20, 2014
This book features two people thrust together by magic and mayhem, as they embark on a mission to find kidnapped youths before it is too late.
This book is what some would call a paranormal romance story in the style of Kelly Armstrong, Patricia Briggs and others.
However, the world-building of the novel leaves something to be desired as does the writing style of the author. Too much internal dialogue and characters trying to constantly critique every glance and spoken word from others as something significant and profound. The dynamic between the main characters seems forced as well as we are led on a veritable rollercoaster throughout the book. Finally, the magic aspect of the book seems to take second fiddle to the forming bond between the main characters.
Be that as it may, this book does have some strong points. If you are a fan of paranormal romances, then you might find some strong plot lines to follow. While the magic/paranormal scenes are rushed, there are some interesting moments.
In conclusion, this book offers a romance adventure in a sleepy town. It could happen to you! The scenario comes straight from real-world and thus is grounded. The magic, while glossed-over, at times shows flashes of brilliance.
On the other hand, a lack of world-building, a strong stable of characters, and a magic that often is lost, alongside a flawed writing style, is too much of a negative to overcome.
2 of 5 stars (readable with reservations)
Posted February 28, 2014
Posted March 3, 2014
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