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Posted August 22, 2014
39 pages of free. Two things the author may want to fix:
1. Dump the chapter on the Chinese horoscope on "hares and boars." It is unworthy of your writing.
2. List all of your sources. Specific books that you have read and write out the websites you refer to using the standard http--sort of thing.
I would like to see your ideas expanded with anecdotes and examples. This could be a full-length book of 50,000 or more words. Your use of pictures was good but cite the sources even if they came from free to use no royalties involved websites.
Write longer. Write harder. Write with more details. You have stories to tell and we need to know them.
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