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I’D BEEN DREAMING I WAS BEING CHASED BY A GIANT PIT bull. It was barking, and then it opened its mouth and I heard Doooom. Doooom. Dooom. Dooom, the bass beat sound Dee’s phone makes. It was ringing somewhere on the floor, under our clothes. My eyes opened as he leaned off the narrow futon to answer it. We hadn’t been touching because he can’t sleep with anyone touching him. But I could still feel him moving away.
“We have to go,” he told me when he hung up. He hadn’t said much into the phone.
I watched the stretch of his ribs as he pulled last night’s T-shirt over his head. The tattoo on his bronze chest disappeared: N—for Nikki—surrounded by swirling angels’ wings. I smiled, seeing it. Thinking of my lips on it last night.
“Get up.” He didn’t look at me.
“Are you okay?”
“Get some clothes on.” He walked out of the room. To the kitchen, or to find whatever narrow scrap of joint was left in the ashtray from last night.
I heard him muttering to Bird and her muttering back. Both of them low, short. I lay there hoping that Dee would say something to Bird about where we were going, what the phone call was about, but really I knew that hoping Dee and Bird would talk much to each other was like hoping the last scratch-off number on your ticket would reveal you’d won the whole $25,000 pot.
I kicked the blanket off and reached for whatever pair of shorts lay handy. I didn’t know where we were headed, but wherever Dee needed me to be, I was going to go.
Posted July 24, 2014
The book Criminal was a great story. It may have been a little slow, but there are some exciting parts. It was a book that young adults can learn from. Over all I enjoyed it.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted April 26, 2014
Posted June 28, 2013
Nikki is a teen with a rough homelife. On the days she just can’t take her mother (which are a lot, understandably), she stays with her neighbor, Bird, a young mother trying her best to make a living while staying out of trouble. But Nikki makes staying out of trouble hard when she won’t let go of Dee, her bad boy boyfriend. He’s everything she should stay away from, but he makes her feel so special she’s become blind to his faults.
Nikki was not a likable person for a long time. She had a crap upbringing and a crap mother (at one point, her mother actually tried to pimp her out to a druggie) but you’d think that would have given her some street smarts. Not so much. She was blinded by love and couldn’t see Dee’s faults. Even after he proved to her what a dick he was, she still loved him and made up excuses for him. It was hard to feel compassion for a character when you didn’t know why she made the decisions she did.
We didn’t get a chance to really get to know Dee, most of the action involving him happened in the past. We saw everything through Nikki’s eyes, and she had a tendency to gloss over the details where he was concerned. So it was harder to understand his pull on her.
Bird was a great character. She also had a tough upbringing, but she managed to turn it into a positive thing. She was strong, knew what she wanted, and what personal rules she needed to set. She was an excellent role model for Nikki. I was only sorry Nikki didn’t lean on her more and follow her example.
There was not a lot of action in this novel. The incident mentioned in the blurb happened in flashbacks, and Nikki ended up in prison pretty quickly after the start of the book. The bulk of the novel followed Nikki as she learned to adjust to life in prison, and the self discovery she went through while there. There was a bit of sex, and while not overly graphic, it was descriptive, almost clinical in terms. The dialogue was different from other books I’ve read – it was short and fast. Nothing poetic or flowery about it. There was lots of cussing and drug and alcohol references.
Though I enjoyed this book overall, it wasn’t exactly entertaining. It was tough to watch as Nikki made stupid choice after stupid choice. There was little action; the story mostly involved talk. Not that there’s anything wrong with that, but it makes for a different kind of story.
The sum up: Though sad and hopeful, there wasn’t a lot of entertainment value in this one.
Posted May 14, 2013
Criminal was a novel about a girl who found her self involuntarily being an accessory to a crime her boyfriend committed. This novel deals with how the main protagonist, Nikki, deals with being part of the crime as well as trying to keep her boyfriend safe from getting busted and obsessing over him to no end. In all honesty, I was slightly disappointed with this novel because of several reasons I'll mention below, but overall, it was still a very realistic and honest take on taking advantage of a girl's desperate need to hold on to the one she "loves". Nikki ends up witnessing, or a least hearing, gun shots that ended up killing a cop. She also was the getaway car for her boyfriend after he killed the cop. It took a couple of seconds for Nikki to process it all but a couple of days in pathetic denial about what happened during that single minute. I just found it SO frustrating that somehow all Nikki cared about after the murder was Dee.. Dee.. and Dee. I was in AWE. Your lovely boyfriend just killed a guy, a cop, a father, a husband.. and all you seem to care about is whether Dee replied back to your message or when he'll see you? really? I mean, it is not like Nikki has been on the wrong side of the tracks.. she seems to be a pretty stand up girl, so I would believe she at least has a conscious. So to say I was annoyed, furious, and out right disgusted at Nikki is an understatement. Of course Dee was another story all together, my instant hate for him mirrored the hate radiating from Bird, Nikki's friend and also the girl who allowed Nikki to stay with her when she didn't have a house to stay in. He was SUCH a charmer (sarcastic tone). Here is when he really won me over, his reply to when Nikki kept on freaking out after the whole murder happening:"What if I put my fist straight through that mouth of yours, crush your pipes so you can't talk anymore, huh? What if that?"I do believe that Terra Elan McVoy is a brilliant author for invoking so much emotions towards her characters. I am not denying that some people aren't like Nikki or Dee, but these are the types of people and stories that I don't care much about because people like that frustrate me to no end. However I do believe that Nikki ended up getting burnt extensively for being so naive and lovestruck. Her heart, in the end, isn't full of hate and black blood like Dee. She really did make an honest mistake for trusting Dee and going against her instincts. The first half of the novel was the whole Nikki being obsessive over Dee, but when she got busted for the crime, and you see the reality of being tangled up with the wrong people and how your life could be wasted for this tiny mistake, that is when I started flipping the pages like a madwoman, trying to find out what will happened to Nikki, Dee, and the relationship between Nikki, Bird, and even Nikki's mother. The whole trial and court dealings were something I was very interested in and in the end I did enjoy the novel overall. I think the second half redeemed the novel for me and I was glad I stuck through with it to the end. If you are looking for a glaringly honest and realistic story of a girl ending up being an accessory to crime and how that changed her whole life, you should definitely pick Criminal up.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.