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Crossing the wire By: Will Hobbs The main characters in the story are Victor Flores is a 15 year old kid who lives with is mother and his sisters and younger brother thy all live Los Arboles. Rico Rivera is victor best friend he¿s more like a good brother to him.Rico is 15 years old who lives in Los Arboles. Miguel is a ordinary guys who has four kids and he tries to cross the border a lot and really never makes, he always gets caught crossing. This story is mostly about a boy called, Victor and a boy Rico they are very close friends and there more like true brothers. Victor¿s dad died when he was at work a couple years ago, without his father the family stats getting very poor. He use to grow corn and sell but it didn¿t go to well not enough money for his famliy.Well this is when Rico comes in he is also having trouble really no one around beside Victor¿..Rico isn¿t doing so well he¿s brother live in Tucson Arizona he going to sneak over the border to get to him but how? He gets money from his brother for the coyote money which is people who smuggle people over the border..With 1500 dollars he has people sneaking him over the border to get to Tucson Az.Rico leaves to get to AZ.While he¿s already gone Victor has to think of some way to get money so he wants to cross the border too. He has no coyote money at all only a backpack, very little food, water, and some money. With very little money can buy him a can of food only or water. He leaves his hometown, he takes a bus and on the bus he sits next to a guy that¿s not talktedive at all..while there were on the bus there was a roadblock up a couple hundred yards. There looking for people who don¿t have identification to ride on a bus or to be in a town. The police man enter the bus and said ¿passports, tourist cards,idennification.¿Victor didn¿t have any of those so he got send out side. He had to sit by a police car, the police people weren¿t watching at all so Victor got away very carefully. The police finally found out he ran away bye then victor was football fields away. He walk to the town that took along time to get to, it was a border town. He got there and he went to a church to light a candle and think about his famliy.He saw a guy and he found out is was Miguel from the bus. Victor followed him to a bus ternimal.He had to get on the bus without no ticket, he snuck on board.Meguel told the bus captain to make a stop. It wasn¿t a bus a actually bus stop. Victor got of the bus with him. They went across the wire into Arizona. They snuck across the border together as a team.Meguel new everything about crossing the border every bit..They kept on going until they saw a border potrol.they ran but Miguel couldn¿t really run so Miguel told him to let him go to jail. Victor left and ran, on his way La Perra Flaca he was on the mountain and there was a lake were a fisherman was fishing. He had a truck and he hopt on the bed of the truck and hide his self from him to get a ride. When the fisherman got to his house he got in the bed a spotted Victor, the fisherman called the border potrol.Victor got sent to jail and he was lucky because there was no more room for Victor so he got sent back to his hometown. There he meat Rico again he didn¿t make it either. So they both try to sneak across the border together. Without Victor knowing they were crossing with drug smugglers. Well on the way Victor found out that they were with drug smugglers, it was a bad thing to do. They were trying to get to tucson,but the smugglers were going to end up killing them at the end so Victor and Rico had to get away so they did without them knowing. But after awhile they found out they were running from them. The smugglers were chasing them, and Vic and Rico were climbing the mountain when they saw a border patrol person uncousious.They woke him up by water and he said you guys are going to be reported back to there hometown. But the guy was so unconscious he had to get to a
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