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Posted April 1, 2013
The story had good potential; a mysterious train and quiet stranger who appears in town periodically. But the execution fell far short of the promise.
The story doesn't flow, is choppy and reads more like a draft than a finished piece. Sentences and dialogue are confused, and the details of the story, once they are revealed, are convoluted. Things are hinted at but never resolved or further addressed and as such seem out of place. There is no connexion between the characters and using words like 'butt' repeatedly or reusing the same words in one sentence makes the writing seem sophomoric.
Very disappointing. Even at only 100 pages for 99 cents it doesn't feel like a good value.
Posted December 18, 2012
Exceptional mystery and erotic story. An old train which is feared by the town, except for one. The young woman who dares to take a ride on the old train to a place unknown is in for a big surprise.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.