Deadly Sins

Editing errors

I wait anxiously for new books by this author. While I enjoyed much about this book, the continuity of the story caused me to pause and write a review. I don't know if she has bad editors, or if they are trying to get books out too quickly, but there are noticeable, almost glaring incosistencies in the sex sceces. One paragraph Skye is wearing yards of satin in lingerie, the next paragraph she is wearing a blouse. This type of error happens throughout. While many might miss this, or not care, I find iy distracting for a totally enjoyable read.

5 out of 5 people found this review helpful.

Liked the book until the very end. What was the ending? Maybe j

Liked the book until the very end. What was the ending? Maybe just my Nook, but it seems like the ending was missing. Or are we just left hanging until the next in the series?

3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

Can't wait til the next one

I will admit this isn't her best work, there are editting problems through out, but I still want to know who done it. This is the 2nd book, the first wasn't bad. Hopefully the third is alot better, and out soon....I hate books that end with nothing resolved, or even close to being resolved. Just more bad guys and their bad deeds with some hints on who they are. With a couple getting together logan and his fbi agent with some scenes of their romance. Dislike saying if this wasn't the 2nd book i won't rate it as high as i did.

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

So I hoped for the usual, mildly interesting story with a lot of

So I hoped for the usual, mildly interesting story with a lot of hot romance, described by an experienced author who has provided me quick, enjoyable reads in the past. What I got was what looked to be a collaborative class assignment in Romance Writers 101 pasted together. Errors everywhere, both in references and basic English, and the writing was incredibly immature. I half expected to see "throbbing manhood" in the descriptions. The story was difficult to piece together, which made the whole read much more difficult than it deserved. Very disappointed.

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

Dont spend the money

Bought this book in paperback....two dollars cheaper than on my nook. Where are the proof readers....errors everywhere. Really ticked off about the non-ending. Wont buy another lora leigh book if this is what you get....

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

Where is the ending?

I am hoping there is some sort of conclusion somewhere. The book never ended.

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

WHO wrote this?

I have gobbled up all of her books but this left me disgusted. Obviously there was no editor or proofreading becoz it repeated itself over and over and over and over. I know u authors have contractual obligations to fill but shouldnt ur reputation come first? All i can think of was i wanted my money back

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

This book was 300+ pages of poorly written crap! It's filled wi

This book was 300+ pages of poorly written crap! It's filled with grammatical errors, continuity errors - I can not believe St. Martins printed it. I used to be a huge fan of Ms. Leigh but I won't be spending any more money on her books. It's insulting.

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

I really enjoyed this book and didn't want it to end. I think I

I really enjoyed this book and didn't want it to end. I think I may even like this one better than the 1st in the series (Midnight Sins), and I can't wait for Crowe's story! (wouldn't mind seeing a story on Archer too, but since he's not one of the cousins, I won't hold my breath) While the love scenes were nice and steamy, like we've come to expect from Ms. Leigh, there were some issues with backing up or repeating that I found confusing and distracting. If both hands are holding her still, where does a "free hand" come in to explore?? It seems like these things could have been caught and fixed in editing, which is why I rated 4 stars instead of 5. I did have to shake my head though - for a heroine who's supposed to be so tough and strong minded, if I had been left hanging, not once but twice, like Logan left Skye, you can bet I would have been taking charge of the situation. But Ms. Leigh writes in such a way that you feel the frustration along with the characters, which is what makes her work so good!

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

great

Great book with great story line. Stayed up late to finish it. Loved it!

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

Possibly one of the worst books I have ever read. Badly composed

Possibly one of the worst books I have ever read. Badly composed and poorly edited. The author repeats entire sections of text at times, and seems to get her characters confused several times. I am a book lover, and this book was painful to read.

Still a great read even with flaws

I could not put it down even though the editting was very flawed. I read some reviews that stated the ending was left open. I disagree. Just like any other series, it leaves you hanging on for the next book, and let me tell you, I'm hanging around for it!

Read

Great book

Great read

Loved this book didnt know there was a first, is there another? Cant imagine the killer still at large?

Like previous reviewers, there are a tremendous amount of editin

Like previous reviewers, there are a tremendous amount of editing errors in this book, and this is not the first Lora Leigh novel that I have noticed this in. I thought possibly because her older books were converted to ebooks and digitally did not covert correctly; however, I have noticed many errors in her hard copy editions as well. As far as the ending in this story - it's to keep you until the next installment which will be about Crowe. Then hopefully, we will find out the story and who is behind the killings.

Loved this book, couldn't put it down until the end. That said,

Loved this book, couldn't put it down until the end. That said, why did it end in the middle of the story?

Felicia

I LOVE THIS BOOK cant wait for the next one :)

Sooooo disappointing!!!

I've been a fan of Lora Leigh for many years but this series is very poorly written with poor editing as well. After reading Midnight Sins, I thought to give the second book a try just in case it came through as a winner but...no such luck. The writing is very repetitive with no real story line showing itself even a third of the way through. I did push myself and read to the end, but it left me hanging. I shall delete this from my Nook as it is absolutely not worth saving to read again!!!

0 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

This book should carry a warning on it - there are some pretty e

This book should carry a warning on it - there are some pretty explicit rape/murder scenes in this book. I would have NEVER picked up this book in the ROMANCE aisle had I known that. Stick this crap somewhere else in the store.

I agree with the rest of the reviewers (who actually read the book). It was a terrible mess.

And really, Romantic Times BOOKReviews, "Leigh's Books Can scorch the ink right off the page"? Did you actually read this book?

0 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

Not her best

I have all her other books and often reread them. However, i just couldn't get into this one at all. Plot jumped all over the place, no real rhythm to the story; overall, just lacked that character connection that most of her books have.

Wont bother buying the next in the series, just not that invested in the outcome.