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Then she looked into the tragic eyes of her dear little daughter and saw the emotional pain was more than the physical pain by far and her heart broke, the same as it had that day that ...
Then she looked into the tragic eyes of her dear little daughter and saw the emotional pain was more than the physical pain by far and her heart broke, the same as it had that day that seemed not long ago when she walked to Doctor Fyck's office unaware how far along she really was and how tiny Christie Ann really would be because of her near constant use of marijuana, and how tragic her little underweight body seemed lying there in the trash atop a Captain Crunch box, all slimy and bloody; and helpless too. How very close she had come to murder one that day in May; May 13 if she remembered right, twenty -two years ago, and here it was about to repeat itself again.
Posted March 14, 2013
This story has large run on sentences and left me feeling annoyed. If you like enjoyable stories with a plot and correct punctuation don't read this. Glad it was free. Wish I could get paid for time I wasted on this...
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