Exile

Exile

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by Stuart Nealon
     
 
Private detective Cid Steiner takes on a case to find a missing woman before finding himself embroiled in events far darker than Steiner could have initially anticipated.

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Private detective Cid Steiner takes on a case to find a missing woman before finding himself embroiled in events far darker than Steiner could have initially anticipated.

Product Details

ISBN-13:
2940033118304
Publisher:
Stuart Nealon
Publication date:
03/22/2012
Sold by:
Smashwords
Format:
NOOK Book
Sales rank:
246,044
File size:
200 KB

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I have been writing since 2002 and work on poetry, fiction and journalism.

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Exile 2 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 4 reviews.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Work on transitons and characters, a little more depth to the story would improve it, but an easy quick read
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Not a bad story on the whole but the writing needed some polishing, and some serious proofreading. A lot of women look "spent" and older than their years. The "spent blonde" a "spent brunette" Everywhere "smells stale" "Smears by" is a term I really liked the first time I read it, but after several repetitions, it really wasn't as impressive a descriptive as it was the first time. "Something tells me ..." Four times in two pages Why is it so confusing to comprehend the difference between tales and tails, between role and roll, between brass tacks and brass tax?
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
A rather bad attempt at Noir Fiction. The author can't decide whether to use American or British termanology. Could not finish.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago