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As he enters high school, fourteen-year-old Elvin continues to deal with his weight problem as he tries to find his place among his peers.
The Original Equipment
So, how many relationships is a person supposed to be able to manage anyway?
And that's the first thing right there, isn't it? Relationships. Hell. I never had any relationships before I hit fourteen.
But now I'm fourteen. Everything changes. Even the language. Now I'm high school age. Teen. Cripes. I was, technically, a teen when I was thirteen, because I could hear it in there—thirteen, see—but apparently that was different. I was really thirteen. Now I'm A Teen. Very different animal, apparently. Young adult. You know that one was dreamed up by an old adult. All I know is nobody consulted me.
I used to have a mother, and a friend, and another friend, and ... well that's about it. Now I got relationships.
Still have Mom. She's cool. Quick with a joke and to light up my smoke and all that. Sometimes a little nutty, sure, but she is the best in the world at her version of the mom thing. Of course, I don't think anybody else practices her version of the mom thing, so she's got very little competition. If I could manage having more than two friends, it is possible I'd give her the third slot. But don't repeat that.
Still got the two, though. The original equipment. Could do better, probably, but I'm lazy is what it is. That's why I've had the same two friends forever. Friend One, Mikie. Friend One-A, Frankie. Been through everything together. Kid stuff mostly, but it seemed like a lot at the time.
Who'm I kidding? It seems like a lot now, too.
And the kid stuff held together, even when it started looking like we weren't going to get to be kids anymore. We were like one organism, the three of us, as we went from grade school to high school, never actually talking about it, never mentioning the hundreds of choices available across the city. Don't know who decided on this joint first, but here we are, again in the same place, with no evidence of who followed whom.
Then there was even this little summer test camp for us, to break us ... break us in, I mean ... before we actually came to school in September. It was kind of a horror show that taught us a lot about what to look out for in the next four years but really, in the end, turned out to be more about us—me, Mikie, and Frankie—with a lot of other players shuffling in and out of the game.
That's a thing right there. Other players shuffling in. Seems like it can't be simple anymore. And for the first time ever, I know I don't want it to be.
Which brings me to the one more thing, and brings me to now. Relationships. What happens to what you've got, when you get all this more?
"Why are you sitting like that, Elvin? Sit up straight."
"What?" I sat up straight. Straight hurt. I leaned a little to one side again. "What, Ma? Sitting like what? I'm sitting fine. Maybe I'm up straight and you're slanted."
She continued slicing perfect banana coins onto my Special K from over my shoulder, then went to the counter and came back with a saucer. On the saucer were seven apricots arranged in a circle around the center ring. A beautiful overripe apricot-blossom flower.
"I'm not eating those, you know." I looked so I was viewing her face-on and serious—and upside down and backward. "I don't care if you arrange them in the shape of flowers, or animals, or airplanes ... you can even shape them like food if you want...."
"You know, if there is something making you sit sideways like that, it probably would be good to tell me." Would that be a smile on my ma's face? Yes, I believe it would.
Oh, she heard me all right. She was well aware that I wanted to talk about something else. She's fairly brilliant at playing a kind of verbal kung fu with me when she wants to talk and I don't. Fortunately, I, and only I, am more than a match for her.
"I said, no apricots, lady. Take them away."
"You love apricots."
"Maybe I do, maybe I don't. All I'm saying is, I'm not having them." I straightened up, picked up the saucer, and balanced it on the tips of my fingers, waiting for her to come up from behind and take it away.
She came up from behind, took one off the plate, and tucked it neatly into my mouth before I could react. I've got to stop leaving my mouth hanging open all the time.
"Maaa," I said quite clearly and angrily even though I was chewing. Everything sounds like maaa when you're chewing.
"I'm sorry, but you know how it works: If you want bananas, or cheese, or anything binding ..."
I swallowed the thing without even chewing sufficiently. "All, right, all right, I think that's enough—"
"For god's sake, Elvin, we're both adults here—"
"Oh, is that it? This is what I've been waiting for all these years? This is what adults talk about that I could never hear before? Binding? Jeez, if I knew this, I would have grown up a lot quicker."
See, now, if nobody intervened, this could go on forever. Because this is the key to Bishop family communication: Not. Not, is the key. With my mother and myself only one of us at a time ever seems to want to get at something. So it's a tail-chasing competition of one of us asking questions and the other thinking up clever and thrilling ways of not answering the questions.
Except, in the end, we always seem to have gotten at something, somehow.
She sat down across from me. "Why are you sitting that way?" she asked as she chewed a knuckle.
"Fine, Ma," I said, pushing my cereal bowl away. "Take the bananas. Just take 'em."
"Are you injured?"
Thank god Frankie screamed for me from the sidewalk.
"Gotta run, Ma. Go ahead and finish my apricots for me."
"We're going to talk about this later, Elvin."
I kissed my mother on the cheek. "That'll be swell."
"Don't kiss me on the cheek. And don't say swell to me ever again or I'll wash your mouth out with Mr. Clean."
No dope, my ma. She knows when she's being mocked.
"Look at the way you're walking," she said as she watched me from behind. "What kind of walk is that?"
"What kind of walk is that?" Mikie asked as he and Frankie watched me approach.
"What is it with everybody today, I gotta have a name for my walk? Okay, this is my Tuesday kind of walk."
"No, there's something wrong with you," Frankie said, as we headed down the block toward the bus stop.
"Listen, I just finished getting tough with my ma. You want a piece of that, huh?" I sounded so tough I was scaring myself. It was the affliction getting to me.
I was the only one I was scaring though. The boys persisted. They are persistent boys. Like I said, they have been my friends forever, and being my friend brings along with it an urge to fix me. I'm a fixer-upper, and these guys are show houses.
I hate 'em.
But if I did hate 'em, you couldn't blame me. Frankie's handsome like a Greek statue only with more color and mouth and hair. And he's got this oozy charm thing that would make you sick if you could resist it, which nobody seems able to do. And Mikie—whom we call Dad because he's so mature and sensible and all that crap—is, like, the guy who fits in every picture. He could fit, for example, with the poindexter crowd, hang around and talk with them and not fall on his face even though he's got no poindexter in him. He could then walk away from that bunch, head into the gym, and join any pickup game of basketball that might be going on. He doesn't dominate a game, but he's always a player. Never picked lower than third. There have been times when he was picked twice, once by each team, while I was still sitting there totally, embarrassingly, available in the talent pool.
Lofty figures, you might say. So what are they doing with a benchwarmer like me?
Because. I got to them before the world did. So they are different to me.
Which doesn't mean they still don't want to fix me from time to time.
"Give it up," Mikie said. "You're among friends. If you can't tell us ..."
I paused, winced, looked in every direction, including the sky for eavesdropping UFOs, then I whispered its name to my nearest and dearest.
"Hemorrhoids?" Frankie squealed. His immediate reaction was amused; then he got all philosophical, trying to work this out. "How do they know who to go to? I mean, like, hemorrhoids and bald spots and lazy eyes and stuff. They never go to somebody like me. They always go to ..."
"Shut up," I snapped. Understand, if he was trying to insult me, I wouldn't have been so upset.
"It is kind of funny, El," Mike said.
"It is kind of not," I replied.
"Come on," Mike tried again. "Don't make a big thing. You're always exaggerating. It's not really, really painful, right?"
Which explained it. Mike is a very sympathetic soul—who was a little short on information at the moment.
"No, it doesn't hurt much, Mike," I said. "Run and find me a tree branch that's on fire, and I'll show ya."
"What're you doing with hemorrhoids?" Frank asked, still talking really loudly.
"What am I doing with them, Frank? What am I doing with them? Oh, well, I'm doing what everybody does with them. They're like a hobby, y'know. Like being a Trekkie or a marble collector or something. We go to conventions and stuff and compare. 'Say, whatcha got there?' 'Oh, I got a couple aggies and a pinkie and a big ol' cat's eye. Ain't she a beaut.' That's what I'm doing with them, Frank."
Mikie squirmed, winced. Now, he got it. Frank gave me a disgusted look.
We mounted the bus and, as usual, Frank left us and went straight to the back to hook up with his boys. He could still spend some of his time with us, as long as he paid due attention to the licking of appropriate boots, and having his own licked by kids even more popularity-conscious than himself. Frankie was in a different social slot from me and Mike now. Earned himself some stripes. After the school's summer camp, he was a made man, and made a big deal out of it.
I was there, though.
And I'll keep my Mr. Nobody social rating, thanks anyway.
Mikie and I slipped into seats midway down, joining the rabble. We sat across the aisle from each other. There was somebody taking up every window seat.
"So what are you gonna do about it?" he asked discreetly.
"First thing I'm gonna do is I'm gonna ask you to take that look off your face," I said.
He looked like he was sitting in a bathtub filled with cold potato-leek soup.
"It's my affliction, remember? I'll make the faces." I made one. "I don't know what I'm gonna do," I whined.
Mikie shook his head thoughtfully. "You know what everyone's gonna say right? You know what they always say at a school like ours, when a guy gets—"
"I know." I buried my face in my hands.
"Gonna say you're easy—"
"I said I know, Mike ..."
"Volunteer center on the football team ... captain of the shower squad ... good ol' Elvin, Just Say Go ..."
"All right, I know, I know. I read the walls like everybody else. But I really don't need that kind of popularity."
"I don't know," he said. "You could use some kind...."
I opened my hands, and my face, to my good friend. "And you're the guy who's helping me, is that right?"
"So what? A little bit of a rep would do you some good. At least your phone will finally start ringing."
"Hey. It rings plenty, all right."
"Ya. For your mom."
I went all dark on him. It's quite a sight. The whole thing, glowering, scowling, growling, snarling.
"Thought we had a rule?"
"That wasn't a mother joke."
"It was a mother joke."
"No. If it's true, it doesn't qualify as a mother joke."
Hmmm. "Well it's damn close to a mother joke."
"You know, El, I been meaning to bring this up anyway. We made that rule when we were, what, seven? Don't you think ...?"
"It's a perfectly good rule," I snapped. "It's a timeless rule, one that'll make sense when we're fifty."
"If you're still having this discussion when we are fifty ... about how nobody can joke about your mom and all ... then you're going to be having the discussion alone."
"I don't know why we're talking about that anyway. I'm not going to see fifty. I'm not going to see October, Mike."
"I don't think it can kill ya, El."
I didn't answer. Maybe I wasn't going to die, but it would have been nice to be treated like I was. That kind of thing was Mikie's job. I waited.
"Hurts though, huh?" he said somberly.
I nodded bravely. Felt better.
"Kinky, no?" Frankie said, which is what I'd expect Frankie to say. We were sitting around my kitchen table after school, discussing the assembly we'd sat through earlier in the day. Eating graham crackers with peanut butter. And milk. A good wholesome snack, even with Frank kinking things up.
I like that they call it Assembly. It gives me pictures in my head. Like, we're all so mangled and disarranged that they have to convey the whole lot of us down to the gym and put us back together again.
And what did they assemble us for, on this otherwise fine September day? To tell us about the sister school.
We have a sister school.
Does she look like us? Will she wash the dishes? Does she have any nice-looking friends we could meet?
No. We dance with this sister.
Should I be confused here? Should I be ashamed of the thoughts that may be dancing in my head? Excited, though, is what I am. Excited in the most unpleasant, terrified way, at the mention of dancing with the sister school. Thank god I don't have a real sister, if this is the way I respond to ...
"Why do we have to have a sister school?" I asked. "And why do we have to dance with it?"
"Because," Mikie said, "you may have noticed, we're all guys at our school."
"Hey, I take gym like everybody else. I noticed."
"Well now they're gonna fill that gym up with girls, and I for one think it's a fine idea," Frankie said.
The school did this every year, apparently. Got all us oozy pimply-faced frosh guys together with the pimply-faced frosh girls of our sister school, St. Theresa's, to stir us up with forty-year-old doo-wop music and Chips Ahoy cookies and see what kind of sexual slaw we could make of ourselves.
"Yes, a very fine idea," said my mother, walking in from work.
"Yes, well, nobody asked you," I said. Bratty. I get like that now that I'm in high school.
"Wait till I tell your father," she snapped back at me.
That would be my dead father.
Mikie and Frankie stopped chewing and stared at me.
"Ma, could you stop the talking to dead people thing? At least while we have company? I have few enough friends as it is."
"What company?" she pointed out—reasonably enough. "We don't have company, we have them."
"Well maybe if we practice on these two we can get some real company eventually."
She plunked herself down into the fourth kitchen chair, leaned forward on her elbows real friendly like. She smiled at Mikie, who smiled back. She smiled at Frankie, who took that as his cue to do something with his feet under the table that made her kick him. This was kind of an ongoing story, and neither one of them seemed particularly fazed by it.
"So, Elvin," she said. "Are we ready to discuss your problem?"
"Ah, hell," I said as both of my friends got up and walked out.
"You two probably want to be alone," Mike said, rustling Frank out.
"Can we hang outside the window?" Frankie asked before Mikie gave him one final mighty shove.
Now that we were alone ... I bolted from the table, locked myself in the bathroom and ran myself a steaming—and noisy—bath.CHAPTER 2
Big And Tall
The three of us were standing in the mall parking lot, looking up at the big sign.
At the big, and tall, sign.
"I have my limit," I said sternly.
"Ya, I'd say your limit's about two sixty these days, Elvin," Frank cracked.
"I don't care if it's three sixty, I am not buying clothes in there. No sir. Anyway, what do I need new clothes for? The clothes I have are fine. I look great in my clothes."
Mikie got very serious with me. He put his hand on my shoulder. "Elvin, I am your friend. I am your friend, but even I wouldn't say—"
"Shut up," I said. "Did my mother put you up to this?"
"Elvin, you are never going to get anywhere with the girls if you don't spiff up your look a little," Frank said.
"And I think you should stop mentioning your mother every other sentence. Nobody wants to date Principal Skinner."
"I told you already, I'll be spiffy enough when my diet kicks in. I can feel it working already. Whoa, there it is now. Feel that? It's kicking."
"That's good," Mike said. He was doing the serious thing again, which somehow was even more degrading than Frankie's ridicule thing. See, when Frankie abused and humiliated me, it was half accidental, because he was teaching me life in his style, and his style was mayhem. But when Mikie did it, he was being Dad. He was always right, and we all knew it. If Mikie was bringing me down, I always assumed down was where I belonged.
"Maybe you wouldn't have the 'rhoids if you'd keep the weight under control...."
See? Like that.
"So what. You guys can stop worrying about my health, and we can skip the Big and Tall Shop because since my diet started this morning I've already gotten everything under control. So let's skip the clothes store and go on over and spend the money at Pizzeria Uno instead."
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Posted March 19, 2007
Elvin Bishop has been encouraged by his friends to start liking girls. Frankie has a list of girls that he thinks Elvin should be dancing with and liking at the dance. Mike has no opinion on the subject but they both agree he needs a new wardrobe. Elvin sees a girl that he likes named Barbra, but Frankie disagrees and makes him dance with the popular girls. While dealing with his friends Elvin has to deal with Darth and his mom. His mom wants to know everything about him and thinks he is lonely so she gets him a beagle. Darth is the schools biggest bully and is the leader of the Oâ¿¿s. He wants to hang with Elvin just because he knows Sally, and Darth wants to meet her. To find out if Elvin gets to meet Barbra and be her boyfriend, or if his beagle will solve his loneliness youâ¿¿ll have to read Extreme Elvin by Chris Lynch. Extreme Elvin is a very exciting book. While reading the book I could see all the text come to life. All the details and imagery words made the book so much better. The only down fall with this book is that it is hard to understand the dialogue. The book started out very strong and ended even stronger I was glued in after the first couple of pages. Slot Machine also written by Chris Lynch is the first book of the series. That book gives you more character background information. You could read the books in any order though. These books are for any audienceâ¿¿s girls or boys. So if you are a Chris Lynch lover and havenâ¿¿t read these two books you should definitely read them.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
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I personally hated this book. For all the people that have read it and enjoy it, I disagree with you so much. This book, which is about a guy dealing with weight problems and relationships is not my type of book. I wasted my time reading this book.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.