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Posted March 6, 2012
The story line is wonderful but it needs editing for many errors. There are many sentence structure problems that I had to make note of for my own reference when I read it again. Many sentences had extra strings of unneeded words in them, as well.
There were some spots where the wrong character names were placed in the scene/conversation.
The story, if you can muddle through the errors, is definately a Very Good Sci-fi read. It leaves you hanging, though, so I hope Mr. Bailey is working on a sequel!!!!!
Posted May 31, 2012
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