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"Coffee's here, love." A firm hand on her shoulder brought her awake.
"Mm-hmm." Lynn Edwards gave in to the prodding of her lover, the esteemed Professor of English, Benjamin Tallmadge Effingham. Still sleepy, she roused enough to prop herself against the massive oak headboard of his king-size featherbed.
He wrapped her hands around a warm mug of coffee. "Drink up. You have class in less than an hour."
"I've got your class in less than an hour."
"And you know how I appreciate the prompt, prepared student."
She drew him closer with a tug on his perfectly knotted tie and gave him her most inviting smile. "Almost as much as you appreciate the energetic, limber student."
"True enough," he said, tickling her ear with his mustache. "Enjoy your coffee." He slipped from her grasp to restore the knot to pristine condition. "Be on time."
"And my manuscript?"
"On the table by the back door. We'll discuss it after class."
Kirconnell
Posted August 17, 2011
It might be going too far to call this a mystery since you know whodunit from the first few pages, but I enjoyed seeing it work itself out. A short story with a beginning, middle, and end. I really liked the slightly quirky, amusing end.
3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted July 18, 2011
I thought this was a great story.It held my attention from the start.The author did a great job and is very talented.I can't wait to read more by her.The only bad thing I can say is thay
3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted April 28, 2011
I generally dislike short stories. too much info not enough time. not this time, brilliantly wittled to a sharp point. very Hitchcocky
3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted July 8, 2011
This has the potential of a great story. Because it is so short, it doesn't have the depth needed to make it. It mimics Hitchcock in its allure though.
I'd like to see a real book by this author.
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 11, 2011
not enough detail to adequately support the plot. it is however a good plot
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Posted December 31, 2011
Omg this is a song!!!!! (THE TITLE) by my chemical romance.... i think i might read it just cuz of them :P
1 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted October 24, 2011
I did not like this. It was too short to be interesting.
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Posted September 10, 2011
Very good short story. Worth reading.
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Posted August 27, 2011
Wish it was longer!
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Posted August 20, 2011
Short read, but good,
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Posted July 2, 2011
Fairly good little short ghost story, wasn't very satisfying,
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Posted May 21, 2012
Nice for a five-minute read. Very predictable, but not horribly written. You pretty much know what's going to happen right after the first two pages. In that way it was a little of a let down.
Spoiler:
One complaint of mine, however, is that the writer does insert herself at a character (which itself would not be too bad) and "toots her own horn," by stating that she is "...the most promising young writer she'd seen in twenty years." To me, it was something of a turn off as far as looking into her works in the future. She is a decent writer, I do believe. However, I also put worth in a thing called tact.
Fun little short story that could be a pretty good novella if expanded upon.
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Posted April 23, 2012
I enjoyed this fast paced read.
Revenge that wasnt overly done, I found it enjoyable.
Anonymous
Posted February 13, 2012
If it was me doing the haunting, I wouldn't have waited so long for my revenge. Short and sweet....a good story.
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Posted February 2, 2012
Havent read the book yet, hope its good
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Posted January 22, 2012
It wasnt bad but kinda short and the first couple pages told it all
Anonymous
Posted January 18, 2012
Short. Not well written with no plot
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Posted January 14, 2012
It would have been a better book if it had more than 20 pages. The best part of the book is going towards the end,plus some of it is confusing. Even though it's a free book, it's not worth it. If you like paranormal stories this is for you then but NOT for me.
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Posted January 9, 2012
I liked it. A good short ghosr story.
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Overview
How does a ghost get even? Her professor promised to help her get published. Instead he killed her, stealing her work to boost his career and bank account. "It intrigued me, surprised me, and made me think. Bravo for coming up with a unique approach to the age old 'he done me wrong now I want revenge' theme. I highly recommend this very short but extremely enjoyable read." Fallen Angels Reviews