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Anonymous
Posted July 9, 2010
From the first page it was difficult to follow the action, and as for the plot - there wasn't one. There was no real character development; it takes time to know a character and there just wasn't enough time in this story. The writing was choppy and the story was far too short to be entertaining at all. The author says this is a "sample" of her writing, I won't be "sampling" anything else by her - I've been more entertained by cereal boxes. Don't waste your time.
7 out of 7 people found this review helpful.
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Posted November 4, 2011
I don't care how bad you think the book is, saying someone should be murdered for writing it, is JUST PLAIN WRONG! Seriously, what's wrong with you?
2 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 7, 2011
this 8 page book made no sense at all. even though it's free it's not worth the trouble
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted May 2, 2012
you will have to read this book at least 3 times before you understand it and that isnt a good thing. very confusing, bad book. i will not be reading any more book by this author
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Posted February 13, 2012
Waste of space
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Posted February 3, 2012
While the basic premise is interesting, the story is simply too short to be entertaining. Not to mention the description gives away the "secret".
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Posted January 17, 2012
When i first started to read this book i regreted it because while i read i was like opening a book to its middle.also wats the matter with this author writing murderous books????i dont recomend this book to ANYONE!!!!!!!!!!¿¿¿¿¿¿¿¿¿¿¿¿¿¿!!!!!!!!!
0 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted November 29, 2011
I couldn't really tell what was goin on. The author needs to take more time to include detail
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Posted November 27, 2011
Confusing. Made no sense at all. Deleting.
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Posted October 3, 2011
Im so confused! I had no idea what was going on the whole time. I dont reccomend this book, it will only confuse you. And if you do get it can please explain it to me?
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Posted July 17, 2011
This book, was not worth the dl. Its short and boreing
0 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted April 8, 2011
i had no clue as to what was going on through the entire story.
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Posted April 8, 2011
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Posted September 14, 2011
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Posted January 24, 2011
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Posted May 25, 2011
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Posted October 31, 2010
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Posted March 1, 2011
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Overview
Two wood nymphs play a deadly game that goes farther than they anticipated. This free story appears in my collection, BONES OF THE SEA AND OTHER STORIES, and is offered here as a sample of my writing.