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Anonymous
Posted August 18, 2012
Kelly, you started off strong with the first few books, now it seems they've become rushed. A little money hungry too. Instead of pushing out a short book or two each month why not take your time and write a longer one with some quality behind it. And better editing.
This was supposed to be Red and Nicoles story. NOT KALLIES. It's fine to place characters for a new spin off but this was insane. Especially since so many unanswered questions were left about Reds mom and why she came out of their bedroom....wasn't she as well as Kane the antagonists? It was all overshadowed by the new story. Highly disapointed...and i know that I won't be the only one.
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Posted August 17, 2012
I have read all five of the other books in this series and was excited to read this one, but then was disappointed when I read it, I wanted to read more about Red & Nicole, not Nicole's new friend!!!!
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Posted August 21, 2012
After reading all the wanna be books to this series, that were only
around 80 pages, I am very disappointed. First the sixth book is suppose
to be about Red and Nicole, instead it's more about some girl named
Kallie, who I have no interest in reading about!!! Then the author kept
getting confused between her characters and sometimes she would be
talking about Kallie and write Nicole instead. When Nicole was
mentioned she was made to sound like she was crazy. I expected that
since this was suppose to be the finale in the Red and Nicole story that
we would have a whole story on everything ending instead they were
treated like secondary characters in their own story!!! Then the book
does not end on Nicole and Red, it ends on Kallie whose story sounds
like its going to be a repetition. A total disappointment and I would
not recommend buying.
3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted August 20, 2012
I love all the books in this series, even the first book which many people disliked. I enjoyed and look forward reading more about the new characters but i was left hanging and wanting more from Nicole & Red. Can someone please tell me what the hell Erica took or did when she went into Red & Nicole's room. How do you write about that and also Erica emailing her and just leave us hanging. I respect the writer and see she wants to create new stories but when you have a story like Red & Nicole's, it had me fall in love with them like i fell for Ana & Christian in 50 shades of grey. KELLY please continue to write more about Red & Nicole!!!! Hell i wouldn't even care about all the editing issues just give your readers more Red & Nicole.
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Posted August 26, 2012
Writer can't even keep the characters straight....feel like i have wasted my money on last three books in this series....if you plan on writing story about new characters....perhaps you could start new series rather than muddle the current one....all in effort to increase income....all together, maybe one 2.99 book
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Posted August 22, 2012
While I think all of the books are a take off on 50 Shades, this one is the worst of them. In a few instances the author confuses the two lead female characters. Even the wrong words are used but were not picked up by spell check. (Spelled right but just didn't belong) Please slow down or get a better editor for the next one!
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Posted August 21, 2012
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Posted August 21, 2012
I read the first five books and found each one getting more
interesting as I got to know the characters and the obstacles that they
had to overcome. However, this last book was extremely disappointing.
You left unanswered questions that were issues in the first five books.
Kallie's story was not appealing to me. You seem to have dropped Red
& Nicole and immediately hooked into the life of this stranger. I
would not consider buying the next book. I think that, as a writer, you
fell short on this one. A longer book with more story action would have
captivated your audience a lot more.
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Posted August 20, 2012
If Red & Nicole's story is second to the new characters. I have read all the other 5 books in the last couple of days loved them. Why can't you finish their story befor you start another. I' m disapointed in you.
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Posted August 20, 2012
I taught this was the worst book in the series but i give it three stars because i loved the other five books.
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Posted August 18, 2012
So So! All the books in the series get worse with mistakes. Does
anyone ever edit and proofread her books before print. I think this
will be the last of her books for me.
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Posted August 17, 2012
This should have been a book all about Red and Nicole's story, but instead I get nothing but kallie pretty much through this entire book. It should have been the other way around. I felt cheated out on the chemistry that Red and Nicole have, Their personalities where nothing like they have been in the other books. That being said I am looking forward to kalli and hunter's story. I just wish that kallie wasn't so much apart of this one, most of her story could have waited until book 7.
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Posted August 17, 2012
I've read all the books in this series and this was by far the my least
favorite. I felt there was little to the end of Red and Nicole and more
focus on transitioning to a new series. Overall I could have skipped
the series and spent less money on a better written book without so many
errors within.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted August 17, 2012
Why do these come out so often? I enjoy reading them, but with 6 books
at $2.99 each, that is almost what I paid for two of the "50 Shades
of Grey" books, and it was more developed and didn't have all the
errors that these books have.
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Posted August 17, 2012
I really like the series but this last book wasnt so great. I wish she wrote more about Nicole & Red. I'm not even interested in the next storyline either.
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Posted August 17, 2012
I have read the first five books and really enjoy the story line. This book is a bit of a transition to her next series and doesn't focus as much on Red and Nicole. I found it difficult to keep my attention at some points. There were a few times that incorrect names were used but it was fairly easy to figure out. Over all it was a pretty good book but not my favorite in the series.
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Posted March 20, 2013
It ruins the story when nicoles name is where hallies name should be. Like nicole is in the pool or nicole went to the party. It should have been hallie. Someone should have reviewed this book before printing. I hope the remaining parts have been read prior to printing. I will continue to read all parts even with the mistakes.
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Posted January 26, 2013
Cant believe these r 2 99 for only 97 pages
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Posted December 30, 2012
She should fire her editor. There are so many typos that this book almost unreadable.
Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.Kelly Favor is very talented and certainly knows how to leave you wanting more.... It makes me sad every time one of these books ends and I have to wait for the next.... Keep them coming Kelly!!
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Overview
Twenty-two year old Nicole Masters is finally about to realize her dream of having a family.
Powerful business mogul Red Jameson is with her ...