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Posted November 29, 2013
When it's an mpreg story, one expects a bit of a reach to begin with but this was awful. The characters weren't even likeable - one was an arrogant, abusive ass (I thought dominant relationships were NOT about abuse?), the other a simpering wimp. The only "development" they saw was when their personalities reversed.
Did anyone edit this? Or did the author just upload it on their own? There were so many grammar and punctuation errors, it was distracting from the rest of the story.
I get that this is an mpreg story, but really. Like that's an excuse for bad writing?