Unexpected
When going into this, I knew that this wasn't going to be the best thing I've ever read. I just finished Soul Mirror, by Carol Berg, and that was a very intense read; not a single moment of reprieve, and from the first page, I also knew that Green Rider wasn't going to be, in any way, the same. But I expected to enjoy it somewhat. It had good reviews and it had a very interesting basis. I like the idea of Green Riders, I even enjoyed the bits about the Gray One; even Karigan I liked at first. But everything the author presents in the first few pages are never fully developed. We are told that Karigan is very strongheaded and tough, but when it comes down to it, she only triumphs in hard situations because she has help telling her what to do. I could list more examples but my review would go on forever. Other things I hated were the fact that Kristen Britain doesn't, apparently, know how to hammer out realistic characters. Karigan is a foolish young girl--yes, this is very true. But even foolish people are scared when danger approaches and are fazed by death. In the beginning, Karigan watches a green rider die (he was obviously MURDERED) and yet she doesn't ever really seem to care. I mean, any normal human being would get chills or have nightmares or think about death after watching someone, even a total stranger, die. If Britain's world were a harsh place where murder and death surrounded a person at every turn, then perhaps it's understandable that she would be literally unaffected by it; but that's not the case. This girl comes from a wealthy family and just got dismissed from a boarding school. I doubt she watched many people die. Beyond that, there are characters like the Berry Sisters (Bayberry and Bunchberry, in case you were wondering, are their names) who are eccentric woman only concerned about being polite and their tea. They could be amusing, but mostly they grate on my nerves. Then the bad guys. I will admit I haven't read past page 250, but it seems that the bad guys mentioned think about sex all the time. First the governor of Mirwall has lewd thoughts about his secretary, and then Garrot, one of Karigan's captives, tries to rape her. It's really unnecessary. The last thing, however, is the movement of plot. It all happens by chance. First she meets a dying green rider who makes her promise to deliver a message. Then she comes in contact with his murderers who want to capture her now, too. Then she falls asleep in the woods and is woken up by the Berry sisters. Then she gets captured by her pursuants; escapes and then gets attacked by a giant scorpion thing; and then she runs into a giant spiderweb while running away; meanwhile 200 pages have gone by and we still don't know what the actual plot IS. Yes, she's trying to deliver a message that somebody is trying to overthrow the king...but...nothing new is introduced during these 200 pages. We know this from the beginning. I truly think something that should take a few days at most shouldn't take up 400 pages. Yes, the author should put obstacles in Karigan's way but...they should be relevant to the plot. Giant spiders and insane women and giants and talking animals and elf-like peoples straight out of Lord of the Rings aren't. I'm generally liberal when it comes down to ratings. I usually give out 5 or 4 stars, on here or other websites, but I couldn't finish this book. I rarely say this, but it's a 1 without a doubt.
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