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Posted November 10, 2012
Way to gi clay! Revenge is a dish best served cold, i hear, but sometimes a little heat helps! I can understand this mans anger as my son was attacked and because his attackers cousin was a deputy sheriff, he got away with it. We couldnt even file charges,so i can emphathize with this story. Just wish it were longer with more details!Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted September 6, 2012
This is a 100 page flash story. It is a tale of revenge for an unspeakable act and torment of a 12 year old girl. The perpertator, is a young man of wealth and advantages, whose parents and grandparents control the town, in which everyone lives. The ensueing events almost made me sick to my stomach. This short story would have benefited by more details and fleshing out of characters. It would have made the victims into more realistic people, I could have liked better and had sympathy for. I also would have liked more of an ending. What was the aftermath of the revenge? How did it affect the town and the victims? The book just seemed to stop. It needed more. This short contains a lot of violence. It is for mature readers.