Entertaining story with a few minor issues...
This book was an entertaining read. I am a little surprised by the reviews. This was an enjoyable read, the characters were likable enough, the story line was entertaining, and the sex scenes well written, but a top 5 book? The story was good but typical. There is a certain "formula" this is followed by romance writers and this book obviously follows that formula...it was predictable. (please note: predictable does not equal bad...the story was good, just no big surprises or plot twists.)
I often rate a romance novel by the "roll eye/faceplam factor"...how many times in a given novel do I roll my eyes or plant my face in my palm at what I'm reading...I rolled my eyes a lot. There were just too many times where I found myself not believing what I was reading, or thinking that it was all a little too perfect.
Within the first 20 pages the main male character, Conor, makes a complete 180, and it made the plot feel rushed right from the beginning. We learn right away (in the first page) that he abhors marriage and love and relationships, doesn't need a woman, swore off marriage, etc. etc.....suddenly the main female character, Laurel, stumbles into camp and within a page or two he's calling her "his woman" and "my love"....everyone he's traveling with realizes within minutes that this girl is "the one for their Laird" and all they can think to do is bring her home with them...despite the fact they think she is a hated English. It seemed too hurried, like the author was rushing the meeting to get on with the romance. Believe me....I don't mind that ordinarily...except when ALL the characters (and not just the two falling in love) are acting contrary to what makes sense for the time and place. Everyone she encountered was just too quick to fall in love with her and want to help her...despite the fact that she was an "Enemy" and a stranger. My biggest issue was that Laurel did not struggle for acceptance...everyone loved her immediately, she made best friends with everyone she met and within days she was welcomed as one of the clan. Not only that, but clan people suddenly had no problem defying their Laird because of her?? Not likely, and I rolled my eyes a lot about that, too.
I read this complaint a lot of romance reviews, and it usually doesn't bother me, but in this book some of the modern day phrases and words were glaringly out of place for the time period. I don't need to read Middle English when I read these novels....but at least make some sort of attempt to remember the time period you are writing in....it goes beyond describing the inside of a keep and some clothing. Not a huge problem...just found it noticeable in this book more so than others.
Finally one last issue....there were times that the characters got into overly lengthy explanations of things that made me feel like the author had just done some research and wanted to show off what she learned. For example Conor reminds Laurel that she is a "lady" and Laurel responds with this odd Wikipedia-style response that seems more like a history lesson about what a 'Lady' was in that time period, than a conversation between two people. This happened several times, and while I appreciated the extra research, Sinclair could have weaved it much better into the story so that it didn't look so obvious.
Bottom line: I recommend this book as a straightforward romance, a light read and a nice way to s
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