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In the not-so-distant future, a war tour operator flies a group of tourists straight into a firefight. It's all in a day's work, and fun for the whole family.
Posted October 26, 2012
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I thought this was a very interesting story. This was a very intense style of writing and the author captured the theme very well. I was also able to capture the visual element of the story by the way the story was told, for example, “he was cut down in a burst of gunfire before he could raise it. The bullets slammed him backwards into the campfire, where his blood sizzled and his clothes and hair burst into flames. He was dead before he could scream.” I was able to visualize the elements of the man’s bloody clothes and hair bursting into flames with the description and choice of words. I also enjoyed the metaphors used in the story to describe how some one of the passengers felt when viewing the war going on, for example, “he looked as happy as a baby with its first piece of candy.” That helped me to feel and know how excited the woman was to have been taking the tour at the time.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
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