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Anonymous
Posted March 1, 2012
... and poorly written crap. No, we aren't just talking about the bad grammar and editing, Mr. Author.
Interesting that you make the incredibly tacky move of reviewing your own book (with five stars???) and cry "don't hate my story!" which is entirely based on your own hatred of another author and story.
Don't waste your time folks.
3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 16, 2012
Hate filled stream of nonsense. I understand that the author is free to express his opinions. Using a sledgehammer instead of reason and rational thought makes this work a joke. Ayn Rand should return from the grave to haunt the author.
3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted December 27, 2011
As a reader who is politically neutral, I find the book to be one mans frustration with being unemployed and jealous of those who have jobs. The book is a diatribe against working people. A total waste of time and if I could give it no stars, that would be generous! The author has a bone to chew and it overshadows everything else in the story. Too bad. The writing is terrible and the grammar is grade school at best. Hope he finds a real job so that we don't have to suffer through another one of these. Couldn't finish it, too much politicizing!
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 4, 2012
Sorry, your book is neither fast or interesting. It is boring and hard to read because of the cry baby, poor me attitude, the bad spelling and grammar, and just the overall poor writing.
Perfection is not expected in new authors on this site, but one does expect to be able to read the piece without having to " decode" it. Free or not, a certain level of expertise is expected from someone who fancies himelf an author. Your attempt goes way beyond a few typos.
Just remember, no book is really free. The reader spent their time reading it. I hope if you really want to continue writing, you will make an effort to improve your craft. Good luck.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 5, 2012
I am rating my book at five to balance the spiteful one star received so far. Clearly the reader does not agree with my politics. About half of the country doesn't but the other half does and will so with increasing intensity and passion as this economy and our culture festers and declines. Don't "frag" the book or the story contained within. I have had cudos from others that like the story. Sure there are errors. I don't expect to sell my books. I justs started writing and put these out there to see if anyone is interested. They are and they understand that the perfection of a traditionally published book is not mandated in this venue. My stories are fast and interesting. I have nothing to apologize for.
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LendMe™
Overview
I started writing this book initially as a straight forward assassination thriller; based on a technique I dreamed up to kill remotely.I do despise the super wealthy and powerful capitatists of this country. They have ruined it for generations to come. They ruined it for me.
I was once enamored with Ayn Rand. She was an idiot and a hypocrite.
I express a lot of opinion in this and speak the absolute truth about the deception of 911.
I get a ...