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The old woman who swallowed the fly wouldn't have fared so well in the real world.
Posted November 28, 2012
Posted May 5, 2012
This is silly, trite, and without any meaning. The only thing going for it, is the reference to the old children's song. There is no ending or beginning. The reader steps into the middle of the sory. for that matter. The story could have gone somewhere, but instead it was shallow. We do not know anything about the characters, so it hard to care about any of them.