I Will Be Your Dominatrix [NOOK Book]

Not really a long read

Basically about a dominatrx that is unsure of where she belongs in the world. It was ok for a short read but would have liked a longer and more complex story. Oh well... it was free.

12 out of 12 people found this review helpful.

Not worth Reading

This story was very short. It might have had potential, but the story line never really got started. The character decides she doesn't like being a dominatrix so she quits, then realizes she can't make ends meet. But that is about it. There is no substance. There isn't even any erotica to it. With more details and some substance to the story it could be great, but as it is it isn't even worth the free price.

9 out of 9 people found this review helpful.

worst piece of drival I have ever read

First of all 7 pages long. come on really I blinked and read the whole "book". Readers Digest is better than this.

7 out of 8 people found this review helpful.

Short story

I thought I was getting a book, instead I got a short story. It was fluff, without any substance. The action moved along but was more of a monologue than a novella. Indecisive women are'nt my cup of tea.

6 out of 6 people found this review helpful.

I guess it could be worse

This was a free read. It is 7 pages...That tells you alot by it's self. This book is basically some person talking to them self. No set up, no real intro, middle and end. It's just boring, uninspired piece of work.

4 out of 6 people found this review helpful.

Blah

It is a short story with no real details. I wouldn't recommend it.

4 out of 5 people found this review helpful.

Not What I thought

This is a short story that just goes through one instance of what it's like for this particular dominatrix. Despite how interesting even that small description is, the story falls very short. There is some disconnection between what the title implies and what actually goes on in the story. Plus, the story doesn't make too much sense. Not a must read, but it's free so have a look if you've a few minutes to waste.

3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

snore

what a waste, this short story would have gotten a C- if you were in English Comp 101

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

sound bite no substance

Not heavy on plot and at times could be difficult to follow even for such a short story.

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

An interesting look inside the mind of a Dominatrix

I Will Be Your Dominatrix is an interesting story that gives the reader and insightful look into the mind of a female Dominatrix. The setting of the story takes place primarily during a session, and as the session plays out you're told some of the thoughts running through Cindi's mind, which primarily tends to stray from the session.

The story is written from a third person perspective, and the formatting style is a bit different than most. Dialog is formatted as regular text, and no quotations are used while the other text is italicized.

The book isn't particularly descriptive of the settings or the characters, so don't expect a vivid mental image of the events. The scenes in the session aren't particularly explicit, which made them far easier to read and enjoy.

I would recommend this book for an adult looking for a very short (7 page) read, that's a bit "off the beaten path," as long as you don't mind reading scenes that are somewhat erotic.

1 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

Interest was held but could be longr

Was a short character study which moved along & ended rapidly

Pathetic.

Definitely NOT EROTICA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cute

It was a fun, easy read. I wasn't very fond of the formating, but it was just the thing to give my tired-from-studying brain a break; especially before my next class!

was good

Cindi was a dominatrix on this day. They had to pay her in advance. She had to wait in the hall and she was fixing her hair. The guy was very nervous. She used a cane several times in this short story. This was Cindi's last shift. She stayed home and relaxed. And never worked at McDungeon's . She gave up the advertising agency a two week notice. And she went back to work for McDungeon's . It was a good book. I finished this one on October 7 2011 ShelleyMa

Excelent story about modern life

this is a great short story which has no erotic elements but rather speaks to the futility of modern life and work. Reminds me of Alan Furst's prewar spy stories

didnt like

This was a very boring book.

Ho hum

I felt like this author didn't really try. I would not call this erotic. YAWN!

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Disapointed

This book if you can call it one iys more like a short story that thank goodness was never printed it would have wasyed alot of poor inocent trees. I expected more and honestly this story could have been a possible 3-4 star book if only the author would have used their imagination a little and brought their idea to life.

Short, sweet,

And to the point. I loved it. I would like a longer story to follow it, maybe, but overall it was great.