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Posted February 15, 2012
So, I don't usually like first person, but it sort of reads almost like a diary, and the writing gives you a sense of this young 18 yr old and her first stirrings of desire for her adopted brother, who actually I think is a half cousin--not sure. Good writing. Intrigue. No grammar errors. The story ends after them together in the barn so I thought that was too short for me. Would have liked their love or desire for each other explored more, and a little longer of a story. But over all, pleasant erotica.
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Posted August 7, 2012
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