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Posted September 17, 2014
MILF story? Why yes, I think I'll pick this story up. Or that's what I thought when I first read the synopsis. I love when an author approaches a new topic or at least one I haven't read in a while.
Kaydee is openly gay. Savannah is her best friends step-mom. Kaydee's had a crush on her forever and doesn't suspect anything when Savannah invites her to the house after her best friend's wedding. To Kaydee's surprise, Savannah has a surprise waiting for her when she shows up.
I found this story quite interesting... once i got past the first 35%. The first 35% was spent on ONE scene that ended up feeling drawn out and a bit boring instead of sexy, which I think was what was intended. I almost gave up before I got through the scene, but I'm so glad that I didn't. The rest of the story was quite good.
While the story was on the heavy side with love scenes, I didn't really mind because we learned a lot about the characters with in those scenes. I did have issues with some of the terminology used as I don't find 'c**t' sexy or attractive at all. There were other words that didn't work for me, but that could very much so be a personal preference.
There were also a few times I felt like we were told more than shown things. Or possibly I just wanted more finesse and smoother flow. For example, 'I squeezed. She moaned.'
All in all, I would read another story by this author since the underlying story was good and interesting, especially the unexpected twist towards the end.
I was given this in return for an honest review by Inked Rainbow Reads.
Posted August 3, 2011
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