This was a very well written short story. It transitions back and forth very smoothly from Jack to Kaylie, so the reader is able to get a good amount of perspective from each character. This perspective has allowed Cate Dean to create two excellent, multi-faceted characters that work well together, and the story/dialogue play well off of their newly found trust and developing relationship.
Cate Dean has been writing since she could hold a pen in her hand and put more than two words together on paper. She grew up losing herself in the wilds of fantasy worlds, and has had some of her own adventures while tromping through the UK, and a few other parts of the world. A lover of all things supernatural, she infuses that love into her stories, giving them a unique edge. When she's not writing, she loves cooking, scaring herself silly in the local cemeteries, and reading pretty much anything she can get her hands on.
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