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From The Critics[A] political thriller with a punch....Shelby weaves a fascinating and compelling tale of corruption, greed and jealousy. The plot twist at the end is a total surprise.
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Shelby follows his blockbuster debut, Days of Drums, with an even more electrifying Washington heart-stopper. When General Griffin North, a highly decorated African-American icon, dies in a plane crash, the special commission looking into the event calls it a tragic accident by pilot error. But Major Mollie Smith of the CID suspects that the general was murdered and vows to find the truth -- by herself, if necessary.
When Warrant Officer Rachel Collins of Army CID hears the dying whispers of a sergeant who once served as driver for the highly decorated General Griffin North, she realizes that the general was the victim of an assassination plot. After Collins's mentor, Major Mollie Smith, is murdered following her attempt to relocate two witnesses who hold key information, Collins herself becomes the next target of an ace CIA hit man known as the Engineer. Help arrives in the person of Smith's brother, an FBI agent, but the plot thickens when Collins discovers that North was Smith's secret lover.
In addition to the requisite high-level political shenanigans and an alphabet soup of covert agencies, Shelby stirs in white supremacists, a venal federal judge, cross-country air chases, glitzy resort settings and steamy romance. It's much too much, and while the final chapters crackle with action, the plot tricks Shelby uses to reach them, as well as his familiar characters, will have long worn readers' patience thin.
A blue-ribbon commission headed by Supreme Court nominee Judge Simon Esterhaus has ruled the fatal crash of Gen. Griffin North's jet accidental, ending the government's investigation into the death of the popular African-American who'd been on track to be the next vice-president. But a dying supply sergeant turned grass-roots terrorist brags to Major Mollie Smith, of the Army's Criminal Investigation Division, that North was murdered. Since Mollie was North's long-term lover, she's just the avenger to take the two informants who can nail North's killers under her wing and stash them safely until they can tell their story. Little does Mollie know that she's already in the sights of the Engineer, the jack-of-all-arms who, North's assassination behind him, is methodically chopping off the loose ends. Once she's been dispatched, the role of avenger passes from Mollie to her brother Logan Smith of the FBI and her protégée, warrant officer Rachel Collins. Smith and Rachel feverishly scan every scrap of paper Mollie saved, and every byte she programmed into her computer, to unearth the informants, whose uneasiness that Mollie hasn't been in touch turns to terror when they find out why. But Smith doesn't realize that he's being set up as a cat's-paw by none other than the Engineer's co-conspirator, Judge Simon Esterhaus, who's just as interested in the informants as Smith is. Looks like it's up to Rachel, who's gone AWOL from her unit, to bring in the informants, protect them from the Engineer and his nefarious cronies, and reveal the assassination plot in all its dark complexity.
This time, though, there's precious little complexity—just lots of government employees on the run from each other, and the echo of the Engineer's generic footsteps as the trail turns bloody. Think of a James Bond yarn without Bond.
The operation was fraying at the edges. Rachel felt it in the tense whispers of the men scattered nearby in the darkness, dressed in black jumpsuits bulked out by soft-shell body armor. Beneath the soft crackle of two-way radios, after the call signs and counter-signals, were clipped questions. Too many questions, followed by lengthy pauses and sometimes no answers at all.
"Jafo, you okay?"
The words of QRT (Quick Response Team) commander Robert Burns came on puffs of peppermint-smelling breath.
"We fixed the receiver. As soon as we hear a little chitchat, I'll decide on entry."
It should have been no big thing, a faulty receiver. QRT always carried backup. But the backup had failed, so the communications specialist had had to do a cut-and-paste. Another frayed thread...
Rachel knew exactly where the problem had started: with the Baltimore Police Department's ego and its desire to guard its turf.
The situation had developed earlier that day, when the watch commander had received an anonymous tip. The informant talked about a supply sergeant named Charlie Dunn, who had access to a dockside warehouse the army leased from the city. Dunn had allegedly gone into business for himself. Tonight he'd be selling a few crates of M-16's, a dozen rocket launchers, and as many antipersonnel mines as he could get his hands on. The buyer was some rich guy from out west, a regional commander of the White Guard. No name had been given, but apparently Dunn had done business with the Guard before -- was in fact a charter member. When the unidentified caller made references to Oklahoma City and Ruby Ridge, Baltimore P.D. sat up and took notice.
But it did not share this information with any other agency, federal, state, or local. An assistant deputy district attorney decided it didn't have to. The warehouse complex was owned by the city. The army was only a tenant. There was no reason to suspect that the call had been made outside the sovereign state of Maryland, so the issue of interstate transmission regarding a possible felony was moot. Only when the police needed to confirm the existence and location of Sergeant Charlie Dunn had they been forced to go outside the department. That route had led them through the central army registry in Alexandria, Virginia, and ultimately to the army's Criminal Investigation Division at Fort Belvoir.
Rachel remembered how the duty officer at Fort Belvoir, Jessup, had put it to her:
"Baltimore P.D. has its collective nuts in a wringer over Dunn. Our records show he's clean. My guess? Their informant is either stringing them along or else he's ponying up the wrong guy. Go up to Baltimore, Collins, and see what these Joes really have. If army personnel are involved, get on the horn to me pronto."
"What's my standing re Baltimore P.D., sir?"
"You're a Jafo, Collins. Nothing more."
"And if the situation should become....complicated, sir?"
"Then you're a Jafo on the phone to me."
It hadn't been hard for Rachel to tell that the local enforcement was less than enthusiastic about her arrival. Maybe they were expecting a big, strapping specimen with ranger flashes, not this five-foot-seven, California-beach blonde with blue eyes and freckles across her nose. Rachel had felt eyes roving over her as soon as she'd stepped out of the army-issue sedan in the parking lot of the QRT command post. There had been chuckles and snide remarks about the "Citadel chick" and how many hands she would need to hold up that big sidearm of hers.
The team's sniper had blocked her way, looked her up and down. Rachel knew what he was thinking but would not stoop to explain that she'd just come off a ten-day R&R in Santa Barbara.
"You the Jafo?"
Rachel had stepped hard on the insult, let it slide right off hen "That's correct, sir....Just another fucking observer."
"Make sure you stay out of my line of fire is all, sweet thing."
Then the QRT commander had come walking up. He was close enough to have heard the sniper's last comment, but all he'd said was, "Miss Collins, I'm Commander Burns. You ready to go?"
Now, two hours later, Rachel lay grilling on the roof. The night sky was moonless and clouded over, and the heat crept along her skin like a rash. The cuffs of her camouflage jacket were soaked with sweat.
The target was ninety feet away, directly across a cobblestone street that gleamed with crankshaft oil leaked from big rigs. The metal warehouse was Vietnam vintage, its four-story sides sagging and streaked with rust. The cargo bays were empty, the roll-down doors closed. There was a smaller door, garage size, to the left of the bays. It was padlocked. Above was a row of grimy windows with wire mesh embedded in the glass. Beyond the windows was total darkness, not even the telltale glow of a cigarette being smoked in the darkness.
"When is Dunn supposed to arrive -- according to your informant?"
Burns, stretched out beside her, expelled a breath that hung in the hot, heavy air like a tired balloon. He kept his Wolf's Eyes night vision binoculars pressed against his eyes. "Sometime before midnight. These things don't run on a clock, Jafo. Most times you gotta wait 'em out."
Rachel knew more about surveillance than she cared to share. In July she'd pulled a wait-and-see for twenty-two hours outside Flagstaff, the temperature nudging 117.
So far, QRT had done it by the book. The soft-entry specialist had gone in first, popped the lock on the garage door, and disappeared inside. In less than two minutes he had bypassed the alarm, installed the microphones and transmitter, and finished the job. On his way out he had relocked the door. By then the rest of the eight-man squad was in position, two snipers on the other rooftops targeting the windows, the rest of the team scattered behind dumpsters and locked Peterbilt rigs. Rachel had been shepherded along by Burns, a short, wiry man with a tic at the right side of his mouth, chewing breath mints. He'd chosen the shed roof to set up the command and control post. He'd grasped her arm once, hard, to let her know he expected her to stay put.
The warehouse receiver perched beside her hissed like a snake testing the air for prey. The only other sound coming out of the twin two-inch speakers was that of dripping water. Rachel had no idea where the microphones were concealed. Either they were very sensitive or one had been laid near a sink or a drain.
Burns pressed the earpiece of his two-way radio headset. "Go, Four."
"We got us a vehicle coming down the alley from the west. Chevy Suburban, big bitch, customized for heavy loads. Male driver....The passenger...the passenger is a woman. Repeat, a woman."
"Roger, Four. I got it. Everyone chill. Let's see what he's up to."
Rachel watched the vehicle rock its way down the street, slow, then turn and back up to the padlocked warehouse door. There was enough light from the lamps over the cargo bays to illuminate the driver's face when he got out.
"By my reckoning that's Dunn," Burns murmured.
The face, which could have belonged to an over-the-hill boxer, matched the photo Rachel had memorized from Dunn's file. Except that now the supply sergeant was dressed in work boots, jeans, and a stained T-shirt.
The passenger door opened and a woman's head appeared. She had a thin, pinched face, the kind you saw behind fly-spattered windows in trailer parks.
Rachel heard Dunn growl, "I told you to stay the fuck in the truck!"
The woman retreated, taking care to close the passenger door quietly. Rachel watched Charlie Dunn go to work on the lock. A few seconds later he was rolling up the garage door and punching in the alarm codes.
Dunn got back into the Suburban and eased it inside the warehouse. He came back to bring down the door, then pale lights glowed through the warehouse windows.
"That truck he's got won't carry the ordnance he's supposed to be stealing," Rachel said. "And the woman --"
"Dunn's not the one who'll be taking the stuff," Burns said, cutting her off. "The buyer hasn't arrived yet."
"But he brings his wife or girlfriend to the meet?"
"Big deal." He shrugged. "He's probably done this a hundred times before. She'll stay in the truck, he'll do the deal, in twenty minutes everyone's on their way."
Rachel didn't buy that. The presence of the woman made it all wrong. Now the receiver was sending up a stream of chatter from inside the warehouse.
"I told you to stay in the goddamn truck!"
Then, the sickening sound of flesh smacking flesh. The woman screamed once, then a second time, followed by something that sounded like a baseball bat striking a hanging side of beef.
Then, a third cry...and wailing.
Rachel twisted around. "He's got kids in there!"
Burns stared at her, then slowly raised his binoculars. Rachel heard questions coming in over the twoway radio.
"Everyone relax. Domestic violence isn't our gig. Stay frosty. The buyer has to be along...."
He turned to Rachel. "When we bring Dunn out, you can teach him some manners, if you have a mind to."
The screams and shouting died away to sobbing and a child's whimper. The woman was breathing hard through her pain. Rachel imagined her crawling back into the truck, over the seats, flinging her arms around the child, terrified yet trying to comfort him.
"Forget the fucking kid and get out here now!"
Dunn talking, the tailgate of the truck dropping into place. Labored breathing as he struggled with something heavy. Then a thud as a wooden crate was dumped on the metal bed.
Rachel glanced at Burns, saw the tic working furiously. She heard the vehicle door opening and flinched when the woman cried out again, pitifully this time, in resignation. The child howled as his mother was yanked out of the truck. Rachel could almost feel Dunn shoving the woman and steeled herself against the volley of abuse. She heard a faint slur to some of Dunn's words; the sergeant had been drinking. He was in a hurry. He needed the woman to help him load the truck.
"There is no buyer," Rachel heard herself say. "He's stealing the ordnance himself --"
"Maybe to resell it later. I don't know. And I don't really give a damn. He's an army noncom thief. And that makes him mine."
"Collins, don't you fuck this up for me!"
Burns rose to grab her, but he was too slow. Rachel had rolled away from him and was perched on the edge of the roof.
"You want to take this up with my commanding officer, Burns? Fine. But we're going to get pictures of that woman and kid, so get ready to explain why you sat around while he beat them."
Rachel dropped, hitting the ground harder than she expected, legs pumping across the oil-slick lot. She pressed herself against the garage door, breathing deeply to steady herself. Her weapon was out, chambered.
Now, in the stillness, she felt the hairs on her forearms push up against her camouflage jacket. Somewhere out there, eight barrels held her in their sights, fingers curled around trigger guards. Someone at Fort Belvoir had once told her that Baltimore QRT was a professional bunch, no cowboys. She hoped so.
Raising the warehouse door would take too long, make too much noise. Dunn had an arsenal in there he could turn on her.
That left the windows.
Rachel jumped up onto the landing bay and grabbed the first iron handhold welded to the side of the warehouse. Pulling herself up, she climbed thirty feet to the ledge beneath the windows.
She saw it all now through a pane covered with decades of soot. It was like peering through a fogged-up windshield.
The Suburban was parked in the middle of an empty rectangle defined by stacked pallets. Both the passenger and driver doors were open, and the tailgate was down.
The little boy huddled in the passenger seat was no more than six or seven years old, dressed in blue denim overalls, clutching an Orioles baseball cap. Rachel saw his lips move, thought he might be singing to himself, the way children did when they regressed from violence they could not stop.
And there was Charlie Dunn, dragging another crate across the polished concrete floor, sweat pouring off him, muscles straining. Dunn was in good shape, not much of a belly. Rachel knew she would have to take him down hard and fast.
Dunn maneuvered the wooden crate close to the tailgate and barked at his wife. She bent over and grabbed the rope handle with both hands. Dunn did the same, lifted his end easily enough, cursed her as she struggled.
Then he made the mistake of swinging his end onto the tailgate. The woman didn't have nearly the strength to copy Dunn's move. For a split second she alone was holding the weight of the crate. As the rope handle tore into her palms, she cried out and jumped back, letting go of her end. The crate crashed to the floor. The top popped, and M-16 rifles gleaming with factory oil spilled across the concrete.
Dunn pounced on her, using his fists to pummel her forearms as she tried to cover her face; then he went for the exposed rib cage, knocking the wind out of her.
He was still raging when the windows high above him exploded.
The glass was so old and brittle that it shattered into shards no bigger than snowflakes. Her arms protecting her face, Rachel jumped, landing with both feet on a stack of pallets thirty feet below. Searing pain shot up through her ankles to her thighs as she tucked her upper body and rolled forward on her shoulders. Her hands were smeared with blood as she held fast to her sidearm.
Charlie Dunn had snapped out of his shock and was ripping the oilskin sheath off the stock of a freshly minted M-16. He was so well trained that he never took his eyes off the intruder while his hands slapped the rifle together.
Rachel shook herself, showering splintered glass to the floor, then leaped onto the forklift parked beside the pallets. She landed on the seat and from there jumped the remaining distance to the floor, where she took cover behind the thick steel engine housing at the rear of the machine.
"CID, Dunn! Give it up. Now!"
Rachel heard the telltale click beneath the echo of her words and scrambled behind the forklift's four-foot-high rear tire. A split second later the warehouse was filled with the roar of automatic gunfire. Chips of hard tire rubber caromed off Rachel's back and shoulders.
"Yo, bitch! In case you didn't notice, I'm not alone!"
Dunn's voice rang through the cordite-hazed air. Rachel peered around the shredded tire, saw Dunn with his forearm around the woman's throat, dragging her along, a human shield.
"Yeah?" Rachel called back. "Well, Baltimore QRT's waiting outside. You know their drill, Dunn."
She bit her lip to try to stop shaking. If he saw her terror, he'd slay her like a lamb.
"Maybe they are, and maybe you're just bullshitting me, little sister," Dunn said. "See, I figure that if QRT was out there, they'd never let a chick go through the door first."
Rachel heard the squeak of a rubber sole on smooth concrete.
"So what I'm aimin' to do is come over there and blow your fucking head off. 'Less, of course, your QRT friends'll try and stop me."
The second volley blasted the concrete, spraying the air with dust and chips. Dunn went through the clip in seconds, racked in another, and kept on firing. The lay-down kept Rachel pinned behind the forklift, unable to return fire. Dunn would keep on like this until he was on top of her.
Rachel never heard the sniper's shot. From where he was firing, it wouldn't have sounded louder than a light cough in the night. But she knew something was wrong when bullets began ricocheting off the corrugated steel roof. When she ducked out from her cover and rolled along the floor, she saw Dunn collapse to his knees, the M-16 pointed at the ceiling, spitting bullets. Which was when she put two rounds from her Sig-Sauer into his chest. A third caught the stock of the M-16, shattering it out of Dunn's hand.
Rachel lay prone, her arms stretched out in front of her, her Sig leveled at the sprawled figure of Charlie Dunn. When the ringing in her ears died away she heard a deep, sucking sound.
Got him in the chest. He's still alive.
Testing each muscle carefully, Rachel got to her feet and took a quick glance into the Suburban. The boy was rocking back and forth in the front seat, his lips moving soundlessly. The woman lay in a crumpled heap behind Dunn. There was no blood around her. Rachel thought she must have fainted.
As she moved toward Dunn, Rachel heard the garage door rolling up. QRT poured in.
She paid them no mind. Kneeling beside Dunn, she raised his head and listened to his tortured breathing as he labored to hold on to life. Delirium blazed in his eyes.
"Fucking CID," Dunn gasped, bright red bubbles forming on his lips. "Found out about North, did ya?..."
Rachel stiffened. She thought she knew whom Dunn was talking about, but the reference made no sense. Dunn trembled violently in her arms and moaned. He's crazy, terrified....Still, the questions escaped her lips.
"What about North? What are you saying?"
Dunn coughed harshly, spewing blood-soaked phlegm across his chest. Then his head hung back and his mouth fell open in a rictus of a smile. A wet cackle worked its way out of his throat.
"Hey, little sister," he whispered. "Gonna die a happy man....happy man....helped put that black bastard in the ground!"
Men were shouting at her, and Rachel wanted to scream for them to keep quiet. She waded through the shock that Dunn's words had dealt her, strained to hear whatever else might come from his mouth.
There was only a soft gurgle. Dunn's body went rigid, the last breath slipping out like a sigh of relief, leaving him staring wide-eyed into eternity.
Rachel didn't know how long she continued to hold him after that. Eventually she focused on the boots of QRT commander Burns, whose words were laced with phony regret.
"Collins, you don't know how big a hammer is about to drop on you."
Outside in the night, where the stink of gunfire drifted on the air, a man known as the Engineer watched the denouement of the surveillance operation.
His vantage point was the roof of the tallest warehouse in the complex, sixty yards from where the nearest QRT sniper had taken up position. From here, his Magna-Lite scope gave him a clear view through the broken windows into the warehouse.
The Engineer had reckoned on a textbook QRT operation: a hard entry, using flash and stun grenades. Not that that alone would have taken Dunn. He was experienced and very clever. He had a vast array of arms to fight back with, all of which he could handle expertly. But sooner rather than later, QRT fire would have driven him into a place where the outside snipers would get a clear shot.
In the unlikely event that that didn't happen, the Engineer had come prepared to finish Dunn off himself. A cold shot of 110 to 120 yards was not a challenge, even in the dark.
But here was the wrinkle: the girl.
The Engineer had had no idea she'd be on site or who she was. Not QRT. Who? Obviously well trained, the way she went through those windows and after Dunn. But a maverick. The QRT commander must have been sorely pissed when she took off on him.
The worrying part was that she'd managed to get to Dunn while he was alive. The Engineer had watched her prop him up and bow her head close to his lips, as though listening to a deathbed confession.
What did you say, Charlie? Did you brag done? You should have just died.
The Engineer watched Baltimore P.D. support units and EMR trucks pile into the scene. From inside the warehouse came camera flashes and strobes as QRT photographed the scene. Burns had the girl over by Dunn's truck, ladling out the shit. Inside the vehicle, the woman the Engineer knew to be Dunn's wife huddled with her son.
The Engineer slipped the scope back onto his rifle and tracked through the shattered windows. The crosshairs settled on blond hair, drifted down to the center of the forehead. He had the shot. He couldn't take it. It wasn't the ground units that concerned him, but the helicopter with its floodlight, a probing skeletal finger.
How long did you talk to her, Charlie? Six, seven seconds? Did she understand whatever you said?
The Engineer decided: the girl would live -- for now. He knew how to find out what, if anything, Dunn had told her. He also needed to check her out, find out who she was, how she'd come to be there. If circumstances warranted, he would pay her a visit.
The Engineer packed up his kit and stole across the roof. He felt the annoyance of a professional who'd had a tricky detail in his grasp but had failed to nail it down. Dunn had been that detail. But now there might be another.
Copyright © 1997 by Philip Shelby
Posted December 9, 2008
Robert Ludlum's mantel has rightfully fallen to Philip Shelby, but unlike Ludlum his protagonist, Rachel, is a credible physically-fit smart woman--not larger than life as Ludlum was prone to make his heroic characters, who could be half dead but they could still run across roof tops for five pages afterwards without a murmur of pain. He keeps a taut pace, and the story races forward without the constant circling back to redundant information that plagues many authors' works. An explosive page turner with a fascinating psychopathic villian, the Engineer. A must read worth five-stars.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted May 7, 2000
After reading Shelby's very good first thriller, Days Of Drums, I was somewhat disappointed in Last Rights. I found the story started out with a lot of excitement but soon dragged -- and continued to do so for much too long a stretch. The last quarter generated excitement once again but by that point I had pretty much stopped caring about the outcome. The greatest thrill for me was coming to the final page so I could move on to my next book. Shelby's writing style holds your interest, but this 'thriller', while fairly fast-paced, turned out to be much too predictable and, thus, not very thrilling.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.