Legend of the White Werewolf Series The Forgotten Ones

Legend of the White Werewolf Series The Forgotten Ones

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by Crystal Dawn
     
 

When Ariel’s friends convince her to go out for a ladies night with them, she doesn’t realize her whole life is about to change. She meets Blake, a handsome enigmatic man hiding a big secret. That’s alright, because she has some secrets of her own she has no intention of sharing. The problems start when the secrets begin to come out and their

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When Ariel’s friends convince her to go out for a ladies night with them, she doesn’t realize her whole life is about to change. She meets Blake, a handsome enigmatic man hiding a big secret. That’s alright, because she has some secrets of her own she has no intention of sharing. The problems start when the secrets begin to come out and their lives become hopelessly entangled. Their relationship brings Ariel the attention she has hidden from for years and exposes her to an evil she never believed was real.
Will the secrets revealed, tear them apart? Or will they discover a love that will stand the test of time? Will Blake’s ex-girlfriend cause him to regret meeting Ariel? Or will the men who chase Ariel, catch her, taking her from him forever?

Product Details

ISBN-13:
2940044497122
Publisher:
Crystal Dawn
Publication date:
04/24/2013
Series:
Legend of the White Werewolf , #1
Sold by:
Smashwords
Format:
NOOK Book
Sales rank:
20,864
File size:
276 KB
Age Range:
18 Years

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Meet the Author

When she’s not out hunting rogue vampires and werewolves, you can find Crystal Dawn out exploring the galaxy. She can do it all without ever leaving her computer. She kicks ass, takes names, and puts it all down for the enjoyment of her readers. At least that’s what I think she told me. Writing came as a natural outlet for her overly creative mind. The start of her stories is the easy part. Finishing them is a little harder when all the stories are in there trying to get out. She loves reading, chocolate, fine sweet wine, and traveling among a large list of pursuits. Her favorite people, after her family and close friends, are her readers who she says are some of the most wonderful people in this galaxy and the next.

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Legend of the White Werewolf Series The Forgotten Ones 3.8 out of 5 based on 1 ratings. 210 reviews.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This is a bad book and a great example of vanity publishing. There are many things wrong with this book. First, the dialogue is very wooden and lifeless. The characters' speech feels as though it was more of an afterthought than anything that might drive a story. Characters are likewise stiff and without depth. The main character has many traits, supposedly, but instantly acts against them from the onset of the book. "I'm not one of those girls," for example, then a few pages later she's inviting a stranger into her home. It's very ditsy. This author is one of those writers that will tell you what is happening in her scenes instead of show you. Everything has a trite adjective at best. The main character finds said stranger alluring. Why? What is it that he does? How does she react in an emotional or physical sense? Every scene is devoid of life and description. Even for a romance novel, the plot, if it exists at all, is quite thin. I couldn't find myself reading past page 60. This is a terrible book and you should not bother wasting your time. It was free when I acquired it, and it's definitely not worth a single cent more.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
No real sex scenes nice originial idea but the main charcters never really get to know each other. The alpha is know real alpha he allows things to happen that no newly msted aipha should no matter who requires it of him. His new mate a highly sought after white wolf goes off to new York then Italy alone with no male. Where they do that at? Even if she didn't know he should have been there looking out for her. He wsscway to passive. I finished the biook and the only thing I knew was that he had a twin and a potential mate before name Chisty.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This book was just terrible. Talk about rushed, they meet in bar he asks her if she wants to get food. She agrees and leaves with this complete stranger, goes to his place (lol). The next day he takes her home to his "people" and that night they are mated for life. Then they go back to her home, (with about 50people from his pack that she puts up some, and finds the rest places to live) Really! It does not get any better through the book. They argue, have sex. They disagree, have sex. LOL get the drift? It was all the book seemed to be about, sex. Very poorly written, very long and drawn out. I don't really recommend this for adults because its more like a young teen writing. I feel it had potential but, take off about 150 pages to move the story along, and it needed to have a lot more maturity added in.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
I loved every bit of this book can not wait for second hope it comes out soon very exciting could not put down till last page reccommend highly
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
With so many books out there on wolves and vampires, it's wonderful to read one with a new twist. The story flows smoothly and holds your attention. The love scenes are tasteful and do not overpower the story line. I highly recommend this book. I look forward to reading the rest of the series.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This book is amazing i am about to read the next one in the series the author should be proud of doing such amazing work with all the charecters and just the entire plot of the story i am so happy that blake and ariel finaly got over there doubts and professed there love for eachother i just wish sally and matt would do the same. P.s. if the author is reading this i would just like to say thank you for sharing your geniousness and creativity with us and would also just like to say i am a huge fan of uur work i just luv your style and everything Sincerly, CLL
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Considering it was free, I wouldn't say it was a terrible book. However, I would have been disappointed if I paid for it. The story concept was good, however, everytime the story started to take you to a peak it would fall abruptly. The Alpha character failed to deliver and stayed more as emerging Beta with insecurities, which is disappointing in a wolf series. The two main characters are suppose to be mates, but really did not exhibit typical mate bond traits. The story concept has so much potential, but I am not sure if I agree with the authors choice of direction the characters are written in.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Storyline is great and I can't wait for The Second Son to be released. I don't want to criticise but more background and "meat" in the story and the relationships would be even better :)
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
A work in progress. Yes, there seems a lot can be improved upon. But in the end it leaves you with wanting to find out more. I look forward to reading the other stories and watching this grow.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Story threads broken often. Shy on details since much of the settled territory is rich in cultural diversity. All in all, this needs more work Bingaux
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
It has promise, but needs work.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
No...way man best book ever
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
GOOD BOOK. REALLY LONG WHICH IS ALWAYS GOOD BUT THIS ONE WAS A BIT DRAWN OUT I HAD TO SKIP PAGES. GREAT STORY LINE AND GOOD ROMANCE BETWEEN THE CHARACTERS. HE IS THE ALPHA BUT LETS HER BE THE ALPHA TOO. HOPE THE NEXT IS GOOD TOO.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This is an read, and it's easy to follow. The only thing wrong with it is that sometimes it doesn't flow smoothly. Sometimes it's too wordy? I dont know how to explain it, but i'll definitely go on with the series!
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Hmmmm....not the best free book I've read but not the worst neither. The two main problems with this book: (1) the plot was super rushed (2) not enough story development/description. The dialogue was so childlike, it was hard to figure out if an adult wrote this or in fact a child did. Ariel and Blake were attracted to each other but no explanation as to why, hell I can't even tell how these characters are. There just isn't enough information to have the story make sense. There are a ton of intimate scenes between the two characters but no detail, they just have sex like crazy and that's basically it. The story has major potential, I think Ms. Dawn needs to focus more on expanding her descriptions of the characters, working on a more detailed plot, changing the speech patterns so that we know its actual adults talking and not rushing the story, let it flow, don't pile crap on top of crap just to have a 400+ book, sometimes less is more. This is the first of a free series for her, I would like to see what she does with the next book. SR
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This book was amazing i loved it. YES her mate is a little passive and she writes more about cleaning the houses then him as a alpha. But the book is so good i love love love it and wish to read more so please!! please!! Allow me the honor to read the next one. I respect lovve your work.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This book has great promise. The writer moved to fast in the story, everything thing that happens is solved with sex at least twice a chapter or they all just comply. The premise of this storybsounded a lot better than the delivery. I do have to say I loved the idea of the white wolf legend. Sadly let down with this book even though it is free, I will not be getting any others. :-(
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
It was ok. It was a really good story it just took forever to get to the point. Like she introduces the bad guy at the very beginning of the story then he just disappears for 10 chapters or so then BAM!! oh look the bad guy's back. So having said this I probably wouldn't have read it. It just took forever. I almost quit reading about halfway through but wanted to know when she would get to the point. 
Anonymous 4 months ago
I am starting book 2 right away!
Anonymous 9 months ago
Noticed page numbers skip so not a a true 433 pages.
Tim Davis More than 1 year ago
Was not able to finish.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This book was truly wonderful!
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Anonymous More than 1 year ago
I got this book long ago it is great you wont be disapointed considering this is coming from a eleven year old this series is free and amazing great plot but note the author keeps the same plot but even if it gets boring you will still want to read more. Note it is not my parents fault i read this stuff i get it on my own accord ive already read all the books on this device all 110 books so grr dont blame my parents blame my adult reading level. Read all the books i totally recommend.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago