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Buffy07
Posted July 11, 2011
The general story line isn't bad, but the story needs a lot of work. This person comes across as completely uneducated and does not know how to write. There are problems with grammar, word use, puncuation and sentence structure. There are also inconsistencies in the storyline. They write that the girl's body was removed from the hotel room and dumped on the side of the road. Then the body is found in the hotel room? I am not sure how this mess ever got published!
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Posted January 25, 2011
I read it, and it was the kind of reading I like, romance, passion, sex, love, lust, I will read the next episode when it ever comes out.
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Beth is placed into the family business, and Beth becomes a powerhouse! he expands the business and moves it forward into the future and makes a ton ...