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Posted May 18, 2012
Honestly, I was super disapointed. The summary sounds so good.....and books is just awful. The writing style is poor, its only 89 pages so everything happens unrealistly fast and its really confusing. You go from 2 characters on a mountain to at least 10 in a mansion....what the heck?! And the characterization seriously stunk.
Overall, nice idea HORRIBLY executed.
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Posted February 19, 2015
I really wanted to like this book, and I thought the synopsis was really interesting and showed real promise, but I was disappointed. The book jumped around alot and there weren't that many details to fill in the gaps. For example, at one point they were shooting some bad guys, then there was a page break and then they were up in a cave and you have no idea how they got there. There were also points where the author told the reader things, but those things were never told to the other characters, which is just bad writing. I had such high hopes for this book and I was let down. Very disappointed.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.