great, great, great, awful (spoiler, sorry)
When I finished the book, I threw it on the floor and cussed at it. It was fantastic. Until Squirrelflight said the 3 weren't her kits. I was actually thinking that maybe, just maybe, Jayfeather might be Leafpool's. But all 3 of them? Come on. Now they hate her, Brambleclaw will probably hate her (we have seen that already), Leafpool will hate her for telling the secret, the clan will notice that she and Brambleclaw aren't speaking, and will get suspicious (we've seen that before, too).... and so on. In my opinion, there are 2 ways this could have been less traumatic. The first would be to let us have known in the first place, the second and way better one would have been to let Brambleclaw know in the first place, because now he'll hate Squirrelflight for faking that they were theirs!! I'll give it 3 stars because it was good until the end, but the series finale better have a better climax-conclusion than this one, and I hope the next few books aren't as repetative as the last couple, which were still good.
I just really can't believe that Hunter would tell us about the three without letting either us or Brambleclaw know first. I can't get over it, because I was rock solid that she wanted to suprise us by saying they were S & B's kits, or that she [they] didn't know about the rumors. There is a fine line between plot twists and making readers angry, and they crossed that line. I repeat: Jayfeather? Maybe Leafpool's. The others? That's too much. Way too much.
And Ashfur. This next venting will be about him. He was part of the plot twist, but I don't see why he had to be. He lost Squirrelflight 6 books ago! He seemed to not mind it as much later on, even seeming to be friendly to Brambleclaw, and then, now, he almost kills Firestar (unneeded, if I were the author I would've gone for Leafpool, they're much closer, or, better yet, Brambleclaw), and the three while one was his own apprentice? No. Just no. Too much at once. Hunter bit off more than she could chew here, and I'm very dissapointed with the plot decisions.
My next vent will be about the attitudes of the 3. Lionblaze, suck it up and go get the stupid catmint. Hollyleaf, shut up about the stupid code, they're more guidelines than rules, and she can't bring herself to do anything against it now, whereas when she was a kit, she chased foxes. Jayfeather's name was much too predictable, and I don't really get the part where he was in the past. But other than that he was (as usual) the best and most fun to read about, because he did break rules and if he could see, he would have gotten the catmint, and his sharp attitude is always funny.
Last vent? Sol. The end of Eclipse made it seem as if Long Shadows was going to be about defeating Sol. He was taken care of by the halfway point of the book! To say the least, this was unexpected. I don't think it's totally awful, but I was expecting more on the subject. The last half was more about mediocre, mundane things such as greencough (not exactly mundane, but the antagonist in a story like this shouldn't be disease), Firestar losing a life (again, not mundane, but I don't think it was important unless it plays a role in later books, which I'm guessing it will), and Lionblaze struggling about heatherpaw/tail and catmint. The last half wasn't terrible, but it wasn't what I wanted.
Overall, well, I can't say. It had many pros, but a few serious cons that I count as more t
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