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Posted April 14, 2009
Met the author in person and it is his first book. He is open to opinions and/or suggestions so that he can make his books even better. I feel any author willing to listen to critiques is an author that has great potential.
I also agree somewhat with the first reviewer in it could have slowed down and brought the reader deeper into the story by addressing the main characters a little more of who and what the heck is this all about.
Great outline author just needs to slow down and make sure to treat readers with some intelligence.
I wouldn't give up on this author just yet he seemed to be very dedicated and willing to revise and let his work mature.
Stay with it Jeff!!
Posted October 30, 2008
I AM an avid reader, and I mostly read murder mystery/suspense novels. It was very hard to read, especially with the overuse of italicized words and bad punctuation. The dialogue was not well written. In real conversations, a person does not say the other person's name every time he/she utters a sentence. The characters were not well developed and nothing was really believable (like the killer drugging victims AND collecting something from them and just choosing them at random.) No back story, and the content was not very well researched. Choppy at best, the story did not flow smoothly. More editing would have been appropriate before ever considering publishing this.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted October 2, 2008
This book is great!!! I am not much of a reader and I could not put this book down. It is a must buy! I can not wait to see if there will be another to follow. For a first time writer Jeffrey Martin this was excellent work.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted November 4, 2008
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