Lycan's Secret

Lycan's Secret

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by Chandler Dee
     
 

A hand grabbed her upper arm and yanked her back from the water before she landed. Cami found herself pressed against a wet, firm chest. Alexandru's chest and he wasn't letting go.

"Saved your life," he murmured down at her, hands now wrapped around her upper back, holding her tightly to him. Cami could only look up, open mouthed for a second, caught off

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A hand grabbed her upper arm and yanked her back from the water before she landed. Cami found herself pressed against a wet, firm chest. Alexandru's chest and he wasn't letting go.

"Saved your life," he murmured down at her, hands now wrapped around her upper back, holding her tightly to him. Cami could only look up, open mouthed for a second, caught off guard by Alexandru's familiarity. He'd never so much as glanced at her since she arrived.

That moment passed.

Cami growled, pushing away through sheer force of will and almost landed back in the water. He caught her again, but let go as soon as he pulled her upright.

"Why did you grab me?" Cami hissed at Alexandru. How dare he touch her like that. He had no right to her.

"Sorry, I didn't know you could swim," Alexandru said, brushing past her and continuing on across the river.

Product Details

ISBN-13:
2940044703704
Publisher:
Chandler Dee
Publication date:
07/05/2012
Series:
Lycans , #4
Sold by:
Smashwords
Format:
NOOK Book
Sales rank:
1,198,979
File size:
139 KB

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Author of the "Lycans Series" and "Space Bounty Hunters Series".

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Lycan's Secret 1.9 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 8 reviews.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
I was reading along, thinking it was an okay story, until abruptly the tense shifted. It was jarring and irritating. Such a simple thing, really, to write a short story all in either past or present tense without switching.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
The story maybe had potential? I honestly don't know. There was just so much vagueness. Couple the lack of information and clarity with a constantly changing verb tense, and what was left was a confused mess.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This 35 page short story is the beginning of a series. While this story has good bones, I wish authors would not give us little short snippets and just go ahead and make one complete read.
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Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Not a good book. Needs edits and just... more.
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Anonymous More than 1 year ago
I understand that this is a new writter but for crying out loud, at least try to keep constant with your tense. Sharon
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
With the leaders son, less than 30 page to try and get you to follow the series, but not enough of a story to make it worth checking out.