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Posted April 8, 2013
Actual story is 9 pages but was pretty well written. There are some typos, nothing major, that do not effect the overall story. Story is written from both Lyssa's & Chet's point of view. Love scene is more along the lines of something you would find in a romance novel instead of erotica. Overall it's a short & sweet look at their first sexual encounter w/each other. Have read other short stories by this author but this was by far the best.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.