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Posted June 6, 2013
Um, can I just say that I'd like to be Ariana Wexford?? This book was so great to read and it is worth the money (a lot of pages). There are a mix of funny characters that interact well with each other. I love it when ladies get to kick butt!! There is excellent chemistry and witty conversations between Ariana and Chris. Love this book!!!
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Posted February 13, 2014
This is an astoundingly good story. But I have a few words for the people who care about their reading.
This writer has only a nodding acquaintance with the comma and even less working knowledge of the apostrophe. There are some misspelled words but more often the wrong word is used or something like "buttoning his cravat" or "one morning as they hoisted the mast" as if they take it down at night and hoist it every morning. This writer has awesome potential because the story line is unique and doesn't flag.. The characters are strong and well-developed and emotions are conveyed very well. Hopefully this writer will make an effort to learn the punctuation rules and/or retain the services of a competent proofreader, for I can see her name on "best seller" lists from here to the moon if she improves her presentation.
Posted September 20, 2013
Posted June 7, 2013
This is a great girl power book with very charismatic characters. I really laughed at the funny banter between Ariana and Chris! Their romance is not typical and there are many twists to the plot. But, I won't give away the ending. I look forward to Adi's next book!!!Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.