A sonnet review (from All-Consuming Books)
"Fee's school decides that marriage education
is what the graduating seniors need
to prep them for the real-life situation.
But Fee is unappreciative cause she'd
prefer to partner Gabe, her longtime crush,
but finds herself instead paired up with Todd,
an icky guy whose brain is filled with mush.
Her best friend Marcie's partnered with an odd
big guy called Johnny--no one's happy, here.
So parents go protesting that their kids
should not be forced through marriage ed, but sheer
adversity is good for for Fee, who kids
around with Todd, meets Johnny, and gets tough--
perhaps, after all, marriage ed's not such bad stuff."
I stayed up late to finish this one, because it just wouldn't let me go. The pacing is good, the characters (including minor characters!) are fleshed-out individuals, and there were several laugh-out-loud funny moments. I did have a few problems with the book, which lowered its grade in my estimation, but to discuss them, I'll have to go into spoiler territory.
Spoilers lie beyond----
The couple I expected to get together, Todd and Fee, did not get together. Fee ends up with Johnny Mercer, who is sweet and cool, but who wasn't in the novel nearly enough for me to root for him. When I read a book with any romantic subtext, I try to figure out what the book wants me to want--in many cases, there's a love triangle and the reader can support whomever they like, but most often there's a specific outcome that we're supposed to want, and we get signals to prepare us. Todd was disgusting and malicious early on, and Fee was very harsh, but they actually seemed to be improving each other as time went on. They were the focus of so much of the story, their scenes were the funniest, their dialogue was the wittiest, they challenged each other more than anybody else...I saw no reason not to think that they were going to be The Couple. Also, the back cover on my ARC copy sets them up as the main love story, though the new back cover on the published copies leaves it more open-ended, so there's that to consider. I'm sure lots of readers will enjoy the change of pace from "what's expected" in romantic stories, because it's hard to see this outcome before it happens, but it just wasn't my favorite move.
My other problem was with the conclusion the book draws about the marriage ed course. In the end, the school caves and says nobody has to finish the course, and Fee and Todd are among the first to say that it's a pointless exercise that has no bearing on their future lives. Perhaps not, but the fact is that Fee and Todd both benefited from having to work with each other, and they learned how to be more selfless and understanding all because they had to play at being married. It seems like the book is counteracting a point it already made very clearly, and I'm not sure what to do with that. Maybe the book's trying to say that classes like these would be a bad idea in the real world, which is likely true, but in the fictional world, it's proven to be an awesome character-building thing.
End of Spoilers-------
Aside from the caveats mentioned, I loved the book, and I'll be checking out Kristin Walker's future books, as she's got a flair for comedy and realistic interaction.
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