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Posted July 21, 2011
A yearly weekend tryst with a passionate, sexy lover takes on new meaning for this eager lady when her generous, hot masculine hunk has six new and exciting surprises for her.... One for each year of their affair. The first one I'll tell: a pair of Chinese love balls that the sizzling woman is to wear until the minute of their rendezvous oversea. Not that she isn't past ready for her long awaited meeting already... she definitely is!
I don't want to give away the surprise ending, and this is a short, short story, so I'll summarize by saying that there is plenty of heat and erotic fantasy in this little tale. Every time Corin gets one of her six surprises, revealed by six sealed notes from Mr. Jones, the sexual temperature rises. Mr. Jones is a very devoted and creative lover. I enjoyed the way the author revealed their sexy romance by degrees as the story progressed.
I did have some problems with the dialogue and grammatical wording in the story in several places. Also, the length of the story may have contributed to a hurried feeling where the dialogue was concerned. I did enjoy the tale itself and the erotic descriptions were a success. The story did not lack for creativity and had a sweet ending, if not tons of plot.
For those who would enjoy a quick little uplifting tale that doesn't demand more than your enjoyment, I recommend Me and Mr. Jones.
Originally posted at Whipped Cream Reviews