Miranda Blaze

Miranda Blaze

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by Tara Loughead
     
 

A squadron of Karshi singleships make an exploratory strike near Uranus. Bulays and Ghaavn are on the ground, and so, it seems, is one of Ghaavn�s old friends. And speaking of old, the Death Queen of Neptune has relatives? A series planetary romance. Bulays and Ghaavn #9 The Karshi Imperative Part 1  See more details below

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A squadron of Karshi singleships make an exploratory strike near Uranus. Bulays and Ghaavn are on the ground, and so, it seems, is one of Ghaavn�s old friends. And speaking of old, the Death Queen of Neptune has relatives? A series planetary romance. Bulays and Ghaavn #9 The Karshi Imperative Part 1

Product Details

ISBN-13:
2940011068928
Publisher:
Jekkara Press
Publication date:
07/14/2010
Sold by:
Smashwords
Format:
NOOK Book
Sales rank:
402,090
File size:
320 KB

Meet the Author

Just a red-headed adventure loving country girl.


taraloughead@gmail.com

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Miranda Blaze 3.4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 7 reviews.
Guy_Anthony_De_Marco More than 1 year ago
This eBook is 29 pages long, of which 15 are advertisements for other items from Jekkara Press. There isn't enough here to even be considered a short story -- I'd liken this to being a short scene within a short story. If the author would focus on writing a full-length novel, there is enough of a premise to make an interesting book. There are typical new-writer errors, such as interjecting colloquialisms and forgetting to engage all the senses for worldbuilding purposes. The characters all seem to be most interested in Miranda's massive curves, even though they're in the midst of a battle. In my opinion, with a good writer's group, or posting on free critique websites (Critters, for instance, a free web resource run by an ex-officer of the SFWA), this author could build up her chops to really get an engaging (complete) story or novella published.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This reminded me of high school composition class. The teacher gave us thirty minutes to write something off the top of our heads. I know it was a no cost edition but a little more meat might draw my interest and my money.
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Writeit to make it interesting. Go to the website the1st guy sugested get some help if you run out of ideas. If i could give you halfs i would but i'll have to settle for two. Get that help make it atleast 20+ pages longer please i look forward to reading the new parts.
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