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Posted October 2, 2013
Sooooo.. im on a nook simple touch so there are gonna be spelling mistakes. Not alot but maybe one or two in a psragraph. Oh and i mightdo chapter 3 todsy.
"What are you doing here!?" Twilight yelled at Silvershimmer.
"Twilight, please. We need to go inside. Ill explain everything there. First we need to get the other Elements." Silvershimmer said urgently.
~"ill do it!" Fluttershy sqweaked. Anyting to be out of the wsy of the sngry mare. She'd never seen Twilight so angry before, not even thst time whrn she didnt have a letter for Princess Celestia.
Fluttershy flew up to Rainbow Dashs cloud home above Ponyville. The rainbow waterfalls roared quitelty. Her hooves made no sound as she padded through the doorway. She was about to look in the kitchen when she heard voices from Dashes balcony.
"...then you tilt the first feather and flap your wing like this.." Rainbow was saying.
"Ohh! Let me try! I can do it!" Fluttershy recognized the high pitched enthusiastic voice of Scootaloo.
"Ok, squirt. Now you tr-- Oh, hey Flutters. Ditnt hear you comr in. What're ya doing here?" RD's smile faded as she saw the serious look on Fluttershy's face. "What's wrong?"
"I'm not sure," she said. "But you need to come wtih me. We have to get the rest of the girls to Twilights house. And bring your Element."
"Awwwwww! D you have to go, Rainbow?" Scootaloo said.
"Sorry squirt. This looks important. Do you wanna stay in the house, or shoul i drop you at Apple Bloom's?"
"I'll just stay here," Scootaloo muttered.
"Hey, tell you what, Scoots. When i get back ill take you to that ice cream place in Cloudsdale. Sound good?" Rainbow said, knowing she had won.
"Awesome!" Scootalloo beamed, "ill be reeeeeallly good while you're gone!"
"See ya later, Scoot." Dash ruffled Scootaloos mane.
"Why are you here?" Twilight asked again, not seething anymore but stil a great deal angry. "You betrayed me!"
"It wasnt my fault! There was nothing i could do!" Silvershimmer argued, becoming angred herself now.
"What wasnt your fault?" They turned to see the rest of the mane6, all bearing their Elements.
"Nothing!" Twilight yelled.
"Come on, Twilight. Its kinda obvious that its something. I was in te middle of a flying lesson ewith Scoot, so ya better start talking." RainbowDash said, eyes dartkg between he furious mares.
"What's the mstter, sugarcube?" AJ asked gently.
"You girls should come in. Theres something we-- i need to tell you," Twilight said shakily.
The ponies filed in quitely, evem Pinkie was subdued.
"I-- I havent been completely honedt with you."She began. " Twilight Velvet and Neon Lights are not my parents."
Sooo its probly pretty obvious who twis mom is. ( not silver!) I gues its pretty cliche. But i bet ya cant guess the father! Rp prize to the one who guesss right!
Omg only 491 charecters left!
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Posted June 5, 2013