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Pack Law

Pack Law

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by Marie Stephens
     
 

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Poor Ava has no idea that while working one night she would get caught up in a war between two rival Werewolf Packs. The alpha of the Black Mountain Pack, Tristan wants to keep order and peace among his kind and keep the humans unaware of their presence. The alpha of the Appalachian Pack, Michael wants to expose the werewolves to the human population and use the

Overview

Poor Ava has no idea that while working one night she would get caught up in a war between two rival Werewolf Packs. The alpha of the Black Mountain Pack, Tristan wants to keep order and peace among his kind and keep the humans unaware of their presence. The alpha of the Appalachian Pack, Michael wants to expose the werewolves to the human population and use the humans for his own personal gain breaking pack law.

Product Details

ISBN-13:
2940016696805
Publisher:
Marie Stephens
Publication date:
04/27/2013
Series:
Pack Law , #1
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Format:
NOOK Book
Pages:
132
File size:
241 KB

Meet the Author

I am a Registered Respiratory Therapist by profession and now trying my hand at writing. I have always loved the paranormal and things that go bump in the night. I want to bring my brand of characters to light for my readers to enjoy. I have recently changed my writing style. I hope everyone enjoys the books.

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Pack Law 2.3 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 24 reviews.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Has a good story line but the grammar mistakes and the inconsistent point of view makes it difficult to read and to figure out who is speaking. The author needs a fresh pair of eyes to edit this story and then re-publish.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Good story concept bad writing grammar was horrible. was english a second language for this author? I couldn't tell which character was talking w the lack of quotations and it had zero discriptions of people, charaters, or physical suroundings making it difficlut to set the scene.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Don't bother with this horribly written book. The grammar is horrible and made me want to push this sad excuse for an author back into an English class. I have no idea what to say about the story line, because I couldn't make it past the first two pages. Stick to your day job until you can take a writing class and learn how to edit. Or find an honest friend that will tell you the truth about your writing. And to whoever in their right mind gave you 5 stars, try reading a real book that someone has taken the time to edit before making such stupid reviews.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
How old was the person who wrote this? The story line is ok, but the writing style is like "See Spot Run". Try again sweetheart and this time wait till your out of middle school.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This book was poorly written.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
The story line is good - the writing couldnt suck any worse !!!! If you want to read a real Werewolf series then read books by Nicky Charles !
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This story unfortunately takes what should be exciting and comes out like reading a how to manual.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This was an absolutely amazing book. I would recomend it to everyone!
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This book was very interesting and made me want to keep reading it. The characters had good chemistry between them. I look foward to reading more from this author.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
I found Ava(human) to be very relatable, with the main character Tristan( werewolf) having a very mysterious, erotic, sexy side. I found the story easy to follow. Very exciting and kept my interest all the way through. I liked the way Ava nd Tristan came together through a forbidden love between the species. It shows the links what someone would go to for someone they love. You find a real family in the last place she exspects. If you enjoy paranormal erotica this is the book for you. This book will keep your mind going and wanting more.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
The characters are exciting and I can't get enough.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
The plot was good but the set up was horrible. every sentence literally started with, "This man", or "He did this". It was predictable and only 133 pages long not worth 3.99.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Constantly switches form first to third person, which is confusing. Grammar mistakes run all the way through the story. The steamy sex scenes were not, and seemed to have been written for the most part by someone who had never experienced sex... or good sex. The ending was too quick and didn't make sense. I am sure the author has friends. Someone should have told her to go back to the drawing board. It is a good plot, just not executed well.
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Anonymous More than 1 year ago
While there is a germ of a good story present it is totally lost in the poor writing. There is a lack of understanding of English grammar. The story's voice randomly changes from first person to third person. Sentances start in one tense and end in a different one. Dialogue is not seperrated from narration. It's actually painfull to read.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Storyline was good... but as the other readers have said bad grammer...it was hard to read with all the mistakes
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Anonymous More than 1 year ago
I had to stop reading after 20 pages. The storyline had great potential but the writting was just to bad to follow. With the lack of quotation marks and in correct spacing it was very hard to figure out who was speaking and when. I also am not a fan of short stories and this one was only 115 pages start to finish.
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Josie-161 More than 1 year ago
I was given this book in exchange for an honest review for LoP Fun and intesting to read, a lot of drama and romance with a tint of good fun in the way.  i liked the characters and the situations they're in are so funny sometimes, it was easy to read and feel the characters and the plot.  the perfect lite reading in shapeshifter themes. 
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Umm... "Im shore this book is good but the wrighting is so horeble I can't make it past 15 pages. Im sorry." Talk about a hypocrite...
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
I thought the book had a good story line. Not everyone will like this kind of book. I have to applaude anyone that tries to put theirselves out there and write a book. Not everyone can say that. As I look at the comments below, those that complained can't even spell so maybe they are just jealous. I applaude this author and her efforts to write this book. I look foward to more of her books.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Im shore this book is good but the wrighting is so horeble I can't make it past 15 pages. Im sorry.