The Pact

The Pact

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by Jennifer Sturman

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A mystery for anyone who has ever hated a friend's boyfriend…

Rachel Benjamin and her friends aren't looking forward to Emma's wedding. The groom is a rat, and nobody can understand what Emma sees in him. So when he turns up dead on the morning of the ceremony, no one in the wedding party is all that upset. Not even Emma.

Rachel, who had the


A mystery for anyone who has ever hated a friend's boyfriend…

Rachel Benjamin and her friends aren't looking forward to Emma's wedding. The groom is a rat, and nobody can understand what Emma sees in him. So when he turns up dead on the morning of the ceremony, no one in the wedding party is all that upset. Not even Emma.

Rachel, who had the good fortune to find Richard floating facedown in the pool, is feeling as if she's woken up in an Agatha Christie novel. It doesn't help that everyone around her seems to have a motive for murder. So, while the cops detain Emma's family and friends at her isolated Adirondacks compound for the weekend, Rachel, an investment banker by trade, makes like Miss Marple (minus the gray hair and sensible shoes) and does some digging of her own.

Her investigation gets especially tricky when Peter Forrest, the too-good-to-be-true best man, turns out to be both her number-one love interest and her number-one suspect. And Rachel can't help remembering the solemn pact she and her friends made back in college — a promise to rescue each other from bad relationships, using any means required. Has someone taken the pact too far?

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In the prologue of this breezy, absorbing mystery, Rachel Benjamin and her four college girlfriends promise to keep each other from romancing unlikable men by whatever means necessary. A decade later, the still-close group reunites at a lavish Adirondack vacation home for the wedding of one member to the utterly despicable Richard. The rehearsal dinner finds the friends lamenting the senseless match and their inability to keep the pact, but their distress doesn't last long: on the morning of the wedding, Rachel discovers Richard dead in the pool. Suddenly, the house guests-including the girlfriends, the bride's parents and the groom's attractive best man, Peter-are all suspects. While policemen survey the scene, Rachel embarks on a well-intentioned, clumsy and often-misguided search for the murderer and an equally awkward romantic pursuit of Peter. Quirky Rachel aside, the characters are one-dimensional, and the dialogue is superficial; Sturman's writing is comic, but laden with clich s. So why is this debut so thoroughly enjoyable? Perhaps it's because Rachel is such a winning detective: she sifts through clues at the reader's pace and does so with wit and pluck. The novel's mise-en-sc ne-successful, attractive Ivy League graduates at a lakeside mansion-makes for escapist pleasure, and well-placed cliffhangers, a careful distribution of motives and unexpected twists promise readers light, satisfying suspense. Agent, Laura Langlie. (Dec.) Copyright 2004 Reed Business Information.

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The Pact

By Jennifer Sturman

Harlequin Enterprises, Ltd.

Copyright © 2004 Harlequin Enterprises, Ltd.
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ISBN: 0-373-25079-7

Chapter One

I met Chris at the beginning of my junior year. He was tall and handsome, with thick dark hair and green eyes fringed with the sort of lashes that only boys seem to get but that girls covet. He sat next to me one September afternoon in Modern Art and Abstraction. I dropped my pen, he picked it up, our eyes met, and I fell head over heels in love with a sociopath.

Of course, it took nearly six months for me to realize that he was, in fact, a sociopath. He was a senior and a bit of a mystery to my circle of friends. He'd transferred to Harvard from a small liberal arts college out west, and he had an air about him that was part Mark Darcy and part James Bond. He swept me off my feet, and I was more than willing to be swept.

The first time I realized something was off was the night he figured out how to call in to my answering machine and play back the messages. I was at the library working on a paper, but he was convinced that I was cheating on him. A few months and a number of similar incidents later, I was out of love and desperate to be rid of him.

He wasn't easy to break up with, but after several tedious conversations that began with "We've got to talk" and ended with him still thinking I was his girlfriend, he finally gave up. Soon I heard that he wasdating a sophomore, who no doubt was just as enchanted by his attentions as I'd originally been.

The night my breakup with Chris became official, my four roommates and I rose to the occasion with a Girls' Night Out, a ritual that we'd perfected since its inception freshman year. We would start with blender drinks in our common room in Lowell House and then embark on a pub crawl in Harvard Square, inevitably ending up at Shay's, our favorite wine bar on JFK Street.

By the time we arrived at Shay's that fateful evening it was after midnight. The tables were crowded with a mix of undergrads and some business school students from across the river, easily identifiable by their conservative dress and bottles of imported beer. We found seats on the front terrace and ordered the usual - a bottle of cheap red wine to be shared by everyone except Jane, who ordered a Black and Tan. As we waited for our drinks, I began lamenting my poor judgment for the umpteenth time that evening. "How could I have been so stupid?" I moaned. I was a little worse for wear after five hours of fairly enthusiastic drinking.

Hilary, never one to mince words, had a ready reply. "I don't know. Was he that great in bed?"

Luisa exhaled a stream of cigarette smoke with impatience. "Have a little sympathy, Hil. Rachel was in love. Her first love. Everyone acts like an idiot the first time."

Hilary snorted her reply but held her tongue while the waiter unloaded our drinks. Emma looked around the table expectantly. She was wearing a sleeveless Indian print dress and woven leather sandals, her mass of dark blond hair hanging loose down her back.

Jane took a sip of her Black and Tan and gave me a good-natured smile. "We all knew that you would come to your senses sooner or later. It happened to be later than we would have liked, but the important thing is that it happened."

"But why didn't I listen to you?" I asked. "You all tried to tell me what a nightmare he was - God only knows how many times - and I just didn't want to hear it."

"You were doing what you wanted to do," said Jane.

"Even though what you wanted to do was completely fucked up. I mean, it was clear the guy was bad news from day one." Hilary poured wine into her glass and passed the bottle to Luisa. "He was so full of himself."

"He was not bad news from day one," Jane protested. "He did a lot of things right at first. Remember all of the flowers? And when he took Rachel to Walden Pond? You have to give him at least a few points for that."

"He's a man," said Luisa, stubbing out her cigarette and preparing to light another. "It's a waste of time to dissect what he did right and what he did wrong." She pointed the end of the unlit cigarette at me and locked her dark-eyed gaze on mine. "The most important thing is to learn to enjoy men but also to take care of yourself. Next time you'll know better."

"But what if I don't know better?" I asked. "What if the next one is equally awful but in a different way, so that I don't recognize that he's awful?"

"Maybe next time you'll listen to us," said Jane.

"That's right," agreed Hilary. "You'll remember what a fool you made of yourself with Chris, and you'll listen."

"You know, Hil, you haven't always had the greatest judgment yourself. Remember Tommy Fitzgerald? And what about that guy from the Owl Club? What was his name again? The one with the -?"

"You're one to talk, Jane. Remember freshman year when you and Sean were taking a 'break' and you started going out with that asshole from the crew team?"

"Okay, enough," said Luisa. "We've all made mistakes - there's no need to catalog them."

"Luisa's right. None of us has a very good record on assessing the men in our lives. And when push comes to shove, the rest of us always figure it out before the one who's actually in the relationship." Emma was so quiet that when she did speak people listened closely. We were all silent for a moment, considering her words.

"Well, the point is that if any of you come to me and tell me my boyfriend's an asshole, I promise I'll listen," said Jane. This was easy for her to say, given that Sean was as close to the ideal boyfriend as a mere mortal could be. Still, her voice held a challenge in it for the rest of us. She looked around the table.

"Me, too," said Emma, thoughtfully. "In fact, I'd even make a pact on that."

"Well, I'd probably already know the guy was an asshole, but I'd listen to you," said Hilary. "You can count me in."

"No argument here, especially if it means that I never have to go through a relationship like this again," I said.

"Luisa? What about you?" asked Emma.

She gave a slight shrug. "We've made so many pacts that it's hard to keep them all straight. Remember the one about giving up caffeine? That lasted about five minutes. Why should this one be any different? What happens if we all promise to listen to each other but then we don't? Then what?"

"Then the rest of us take matters into our own hands," replied Hilary. "Obviously. We waste the guy."

That made everybody laugh. "Come on, Luisa, don't be such a skeptic," said Jane. "This one's serious."

"Fine, fine." She caved in to our pleading with another shrug of her shoulders. "I'm in."

"Good. Then it's unanimous. We're making a pact," said Emma.

"A pact," agreed Jane.

"Let's toast!" urged Hilary.

We laughed and clinked our glasses together - all except Jane, who hated when people clinked. In unison, we drank.

None of us would have guessed where this pact would lead.


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Meet the Author

Like the heroine of her first novel, The Pact, Jennifer Sturman grew up in Shaker Heights, Ohio, the birthplace of another fictional character, Ward Cleaver. She also attended the same school as actress Margaret Hamilton, the Cleveland native who played the Wicked Witch of the West in The Wizard of Oz. Ms. Hamilton visited her alma mater when Ms. Sturman was in the fourth grade and told the students how she melted. While sworn to secrecy, Ms. Sturman does offer the following hint: trapdoor.

Ms. Sturman graduated from Harvard College with a degree in History and Literature, magna cum laude. She began her business career as a financial analyst in mergers and acquisitions at Goldman, Sachs. Unlike her heroine, Ms. Sturman did not thrive on the all-nighters and number crunching demanded by Wall Street, although she managed to sustain herself by consuming a steady stream of Diet Coke. After two years, she enrolled at Harvard Business School where, with the aid of yet more Diet Coke, she earned her MBA with distinction. She then joined McKinsey & Company as a management consultant, advising clients in media, consumer packaged goods and retail on a broad range of strategic issues. She now works in corporate strategy at Time Warner, but she does not get free cable.

Ms. Sturman resides in Manhattan. She has no free time, but if she did, she would probably spend it doing the New York Times crossword puzzle, watching bad teen movies from the '80s and sipping drinks that come with little umbrellas in them. She is currently at work on her second novel.

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clnapier More than 1 year ago
Absolutely charming novel.  I found the characters quirky and witty with a sense of familiarity to my own friends. The mystery kept my attention, and made me want to keep reading way past my bedtime. :-)  I love that I could not figure out the mystery before the answer was revealed. I purchased Jennifer Sturman's other books and cannot wait to continue the journey with Rachel Benjamin
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FlaChick More than 1 year ago
I cannot say enough good things about this book. The cover totally caught my eye while browsing. After readng the back cover, I was hooked. After reading this book I went out and purchased all the other Rachael Benjamin Mystery series by the author. I've not been disappointed.
Guest More than 1 year ago
This book could have been so much better. I didn't feel much of a connection between any of the girls. If they were such great friends I would have expected more than just sarcasm and rude remarks towards each other. The dialogue seemed stilted and definitely did not evoke any warm feelings of friendship and love.
Guest More than 1 year ago
this book was great, i could not put it down. Its a funny comedy that reminds me of sex and the city because of the ways that the girls are portrayed, But at the same time you never know whats going to happen next as far as the mystery part. GREAT BOOK HIGHLY RECOMMEND
Guest More than 1 year ago
I was eager to start this book because I thought this book is supposed to be 'sex and the city meets Christie Agatha' The plot is so-so, the romance is kind of... .... I only finished this book because I had nothing else to do. If those charactors can't act their age, then at least act like they graduated from Harvard.
Guest More than 1 year ago
Chick lit mystery, wasn't sure I'd be a fan. But I love books about groups of friends, and I have to admit, the pool on the front cover intrigued me. While I liked the mystery that added a different element to this book, it was the cast of characters that kept me going. Loved the women, loved the location, and loved the premise. I think I'll be trying more chick lit mysteries and hope they're all as much fun as this one. Keep 'em coming!
Guest More than 1 year ago
I absolutely love this book! Since I saw it at the bookshop I have yet to put it down. Its amazing!
harstan More than 1 year ago
Rachel Benjamin vows with her four college girlfriends to keep each other safe from despicable males. Each member of the quintet agrees to do whatever it takes to insure none of them end up with a loser................ A decade later, the fearsome five remain close friends, but Emma is about to marry the centerfold for sleaze Richard to the chagrin of her female pals. At the Adirondacks getaway, the four buddies discuss the PACT and what they can do to save Emma from a fate worst than death, marriage to ratty Richard, but go to bed feeling depressed as they offer no solutions. However, the morning light shines bright when Rachel finds Richard dead in the pool. The local police suspect the victim¿s family and friends and that of his fiancée. For reasons she cannot explain to herself, Rachel begins sleuthing, but is not just an amateur, she is pathetic while also fumbling with a romance of the best man Peter, who Rachel believes is the prime suspect................... THE PACT is an amusing chick lit amateur sleuth tale that cleverly lampoons both themes for their impossible excesses. Rachel is more than the center that holds the story line together; she is the novel. All other characters including the deceased, the bride, the other girlfriends, Peter, and the cops are caricatures of one or both sub-genres. The mystery has several fine twists as Rachel leads readers down one wrong path after another. Fans of a lighthearted breezy who-done-it starring a chick lit centerfold will enjoy Jennifer Sturman¿s delightfully humorous spoof......................... Harriet Klausner