Something is Lacking, no pun intended
I have been a huge Misty Lackey fan since Arrows of the Queen way back in 1980 something. I love her Valdemar series and her Bardic Voices and the Serrated edge series is good as well. But her Elemental Masters leaves something to be desired. The basic premise of the series--rewriting old fairy tales--is loaded with potential. In fact, I loved the Fire Rose, which was the first book in it, and is oddly enough not listed in the title selection. But the other two books in the series--Serpent's Shadow and The Gates of Sleep are poorly edited and her characters and plot are either boring or cliche, with none of the surprises or character definition I've come to expect from this author. I just don't get it. This last book, from the jacket, seemed like a better book than the previous two. It's a retelling of Cinderella, set during World War I in England. Eleanor, a wealthy merchant's daughter who dreams of going to Oxford, is also a latent Fire Master. Her father marries Alison, the wicked stepmother who is a dark Earth Master along with her two selfish arrogant daughters, who also possess a bit of magic. Then Eleanor's father is killed in the war and Alison makes her a slave by using a dark magic rite to bind her to the house and obeidience with her own finger. Meanwhile you meet Reggie Fenyx, a lord whom Eleanor was half in love with, standing in for the prince. Reggie is a pilot and Air Master who has been horribly traumatized by battle, injured, and suffering from Post traumatic stress syndrome. He was shot down, had his co-pilot die, was badly injured and then buried alive in a bunker and tormented by evil earth elementals. he believes he's lost his magic and no one can help him, so they send him home to convalesce. he happens to live right near Eleanor. That was the beginning of the book, and it seemed like a good start. However, the whole focus of the story gets bogged down with too many details about the villainesses and what they're wearing, doing, and eating, mentions of certain spells they've cast (at one point Alison makes a plague strike the Americans to keep them out of the war--was Lackey referring to the Spanish flue epidemic that hit the US around that time and delayed their entry into combat? I don't know and you never find out, it never gets mentioned again)there is about two paragraphs of a guest list for the ball mentioning friends of Reggie's that you never meet or see which is utterly pointless because you don't care about them. There are also several descriptions about how Eleanor learns how to use her powers that are interesting, but yet she never demonstrates her knowledge, not even in the final battle. And there was not enough interaction between her and Reggie. They meet a few times in a meadow, have a stupid fight, and then he invites her to the ball, where she blurts out that she loves him that's it. Reggie, who has been suffering reoccuring bouts of fear is miraculously cured by his godmother, I think, a person who we don't even meet until well into the novel and who frankly we could have done without. I felt as if something were missing--again! It should have been Eleanor, as Reggie's supposed soul mate, that should have helped him discover his powers again and helped him heal from his disability--not some deus ex machina godmother. Why bother giving Eleanor intensive training in how to balance and heal mind, body, and spirit if you're not going to have her make use of it on the one who needs it? I was very disappointed, I felt like I was cheated of what could have been a really wonderful magical love story. Ever After with Drew Barrymore was done much better, in my opinion!
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