Precise

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Overview

~ Pulling Me Under series #0.5, a prequel ~

Katie is a wife, a caring best friend, and the one person her mother, Rochelle, hates more than anyone. No one sees the darkness lurking just under the surface of their mother-daughter relationship, instead viewing Rochelle as misunderstood. That she has so much love for her daughter that she may seem harsh.

Wrong. So wrong.

Katie grew up taught that she was the ...

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Overview

~ Pulling Me Under series #0.5, a prequel ~

Katie is a wife, a caring best friend, and the one person her mother, Rochelle, hates more than anyone. No one sees the darkness lurking just under the surface of their mother-daughter relationship, instead viewing Rochelle as misunderstood. That she has so much love for her daughter that she may seem harsh.

Wrong. So wrong.

Katie grew up taught that she was the cause of Rochelle's miscarriages. She grew up with the belief she shouldn't be happy knowing she'd caused her mom so much pain and suffering. Now Katie is pregnant and Rochelle is out to stop Katie from ruining her baby's life--just like Katie ruined her own.

Still, Katie can't imagine killing the life growing inside her. Hell hath no fury like Rochelle with a vengeance to make Katie pay for ruining her life.

In Rochelle's quest for power, Katie's baby is the pawn.

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Product Details

  • ISBN-13: 9781492389781
  • Publisher: CreateSpace Independent Publishing Platform
  • Publication date: 9/23/2013
  • Pages: 144
  • Product dimensions: 5.00 (w) x 8.00 (h) x 0.34 (d)

Meet the Author

Rebecca Berto writes stories about love and relationships. She gets a thrill when her readers are emotional reading her books, and gets even more of a kick when they tell her so. She's strangely imaginative, spends too much time on her computer, and is certifiably crazy when she works on her fiction.

Rebecca Berto lives in Melbourne, Australia with her boyfriend and their doggy.

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Customer Reviews

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  • Anonymous

    Posted December 10, 2013

    This is a prequel, no conclusion, about 60 pages, preview of next book at end

    This free short is about 60 pages. It is a prequel. There is no conclusion. It was well edited. It jumps all over, skipping important parts of the story. For instance, the main character is newly pregnant, then the next chapter, has the baby crawling, in a new home. It is about child abuse. There is insanity, mild cursing and some violence. This book will not be what you are expecting. It is very good, but this review is about the prequel, not the actual book. There is a plug for the full book at the end. The book costs $3.99. I bought it. If I were the person reading this review, I would purchase the book and skip this prequel. The book reminds me a bit of the series,"Dave." I would have rated this higher, if it had been the complete book.

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    2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted January 13, 2013

    My first reaction: Intervention! I want to take Kate away from


    My first reaction: Intervention! I want to take Kate away from her mother and help her recreate herself and understand that she is a person, not an object of hate.
     
    My second reaction: Medication or no, that woman is the spawn of satan. No really, she is. No child should ever be treated the way Kate’s mother treats her. No twenty-two year old should have to put up with such degradation. I wanted to be mad at Kate, tell her she’s an adult and that her mother should no longer have any control over her, but that’s impossible when the woman stalks her own daughter/daughter’s family. And then I wonder what’s wrong with her father? Why isn’t he stepping in? But such is life that we cannot always know the answers or secrets to ones heart. 

    The one foundation Kate has is Paul, her childhood sweetheart who she marries. It’s unimaginable what or where Kate would be without him. He’s definitely a remarkable hero.

    This paragraph melted my heart: (When Kate confronts her mother and her mother can't even tell her she loves her!)

    *As I’m about to suggest we leave, there’s a tug on my overalls. A cute kid in a soccer shirt and a mushroom cut lump of hair, says, “Don’t worry. I love you, Miss.”*

    As I finished the novella and continued to read the excerpt to the second part “Pulling Me Under” which appears to be a novel and not a novella, my heart is already in turmoil for Kate. I see her foundation crumbling and I’m truly afraid for her and Ella. To the point that I MUST know where the rest of her story goes and hope there is a rainbow shining for Kate and Ella. 

    This is a story where you want to hug all of the Kate’s in the world and let them know not everything is evil, to give positive reinforcement and encouragement. 

    I’ll ponder Kate’s outcome until “Pulling Me Under” is available. 

    Do I recommend Precise? An author who can create such emotions and tug at your heartstrings, as Ms. Berto has, absolutely has my recommendation. 

    2 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted January 26, 2014

    Mother-Daughter Relationship

    The blurb is a little misleading, in that I don't see where everyone thinks that Rochelle is a wonderful mother. Maybe that was in the author's mind when she was writing the book.

    Katie, a young newlywed, has been told all her life by her mother that she can't do anything right. Furthermore, Katie is supposedly a murderer, because all of her mother's other pregnancies miscarried. Rochelle threatens Katie physically too. Katie's father's support is not strong enough to protect his daughter; he seems oblivious to the way his wife acts toward their child.

    When Katie and her husband Paul get pregnant, Katie worries that Rochelle will hurt the baby somehow. Besides Paul, whom she feels lucky to have, Katie also has a perceptive and caring best friend Liam. How will Katie deal with her mother?

    I wish that Paul's character had been more fleshed out.

    This novella-length story is not a light read.

    Although this is a prequel, the story stands on its own.

    1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted September 9, 2013

    a prequel that gives you a good understanding of the relationshi

    a prequel that gives you a good understanding of the relationship between a twisted mother and her broken daughter. at times you want to scream at Katie for not standing up for herself but you realize she doesn't because
    of how beaten down she has been by her mother. the brief sample of the next book left me curious to see Katie's story play out.

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  • Posted January 10, 2013

    I should preface this review by saying one thing: I am not a fan

    I should preface this review by saying one thing: I am not a fan of a poorly done prequel. I absolutely hate it when a book feels unresolved, when you're all 'Okay, now I need the next one as I have no sense of completeness.' (Fifty Shades, anyone?)
    PRECISE does not do this. It is very much a complete story in it's own right, delving into the world of mental illness. This novelette gives a no holds barred look at three people suffering from mental and emotional disturbance as Kates, her mother and husband, Paul, all battle with their family dynamic.
    The pace of the book feels quick, but well suited to the novelette format. The character development and emotional pull is strong, sucking you in from the first word to the last, and the dialogue is gripping and believable. Overall, this was an enjoyable and easy read that I would recommend to those who like drama and contemporary pieces.
    PRECISE is a great debut from Rebecca Berto and I can't wait for PULLING ME UNDER, the 'main event.' Just as a prequel should be.

    1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted January 8, 2013

    I love the raw honesty of this book. I love that the author refu

    I love the raw honesty of this book. I love that the author refuses to gloss over the dark places mental illness and family dysfunction take us all. It's real.
    If I were to criticize anything, I wanted more detail. I wanted the author to slow down, hold my hand and show me how we got there. This book is a page-turner - intense and angsty - just the way I like them.
    Overall, an excellent freshman effort. I look forward to reading more from this author.

    1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted February 17, 2014

    Not sure?

    This book was like reading a dream. It was nothing like I thought it would be. Even now that I am finished it still feels like a dream. I don't think I will read the next one.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted January 31, 2014

    relationships

    Good reading about mother and daughter relationships and how they handle situations.

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  • Posted December 21, 2013

    I just ordered the next book called Pulling Me Under, and wrote

    I just ordered the next book called Pulling Me Under, and wrote my review for this book mistakenly under that book. That being said I really liked the first book Precise. It was a little slow getting started, but definitely worth sticking with. The ending was great!

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  • Anonymous

    Posted October 30, 2013

    Do not waste your time.

    I would give no stars if possible. The book was boring at best.

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  • Posted January 9, 2013

    Precise and Powerful. Wow. Talk about a strong debut. I was pul

    Precise and Powerful.

    Wow. Talk about a strong debut. I was pulled in from the first page and found myself deeply engrossed in the story. Kates is a fascinating character. She lets the reader know in such a matter-of-fact way about her mother despising her, and yet she doesn't come off as a victim - simply a realist. This is the only reality she's ever known. The tension in the scenes where Kates and her mother interact was off the charts, and her mother's cold cruelty was almost palpable. The cover is PERFECT, by the way.

    Despite the heavy subject matter, this short read is not all doom and gloom. Kates is fortunate to have found unconditional love in her husband and her daughter, and there are some very sweet moments with them, even if many of these scenes are rather bittersweet. In particular, the scene where they're dressing up in costume was as sad as it was sweet. For me, it was incredibly poignant.

    The writing was beautiful - both stylistically and grammatically. I look forward to reading the next book in the series. 

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  • Posted January 9, 2013

    Precise is one of those books that you can't stop yourself from

    Precise is one of those books that you can't stop yourself from finishing. You don't only read it, you devour it. It is a story that holds your attention from start to finish.

    The best way to describe Precise? It is the story of Katie Anselin, who has carried fear and grief inside her for her entire life. Why? Because her mentally ill mother, Rochelle, blames her for the death of her siblings. In a horrible way, Rochelle makes Katie the scapegoat and punching bag for all of the things she can't deal with. When Katie gets pregnant all hell breaks loose, and she must finally try to find the strength that she has never had before. Before it is too late...Precise is a short, powerful, fast-paced read that you will not forget.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted January 9, 2013

    From the first page of this novelette, I was hooked. Rebecca Ber

    From the first page of this novelette, I was hooked. Rebecca Berto is a master storyteller that is able to weave her plot and characters into your mind in such a way that they leave a lasting impression.

    We are introduced to Katie Anselin in this novelette (affectionately called Kates by her nearest and dearest) and immediately the reader wants to follow her journey with her husband Paul, their daughter Ella and her mother who suffers badly from mental health problems.

    The reader finds themselves exclaiming at Kates, who continally listens to her mother, who makes Kates feel like she is to blame for the death of her siblings, who were either stillborn or miscarried. We follow the family through the ups and downs of family life, with scenarios that will tug on your heart strings. I can't put into words how much you need to read this book!

    This novelette includes a small extract from 'Pulling Me Under', the next book in the series, where again from the first page, the reader is left aching to read more. I can't wait for 'Pulling Me Under' to come out, so I can continue to follow Kate's journey. I read so many books and have come across so many writers, and it's not very often that an author can make me become so invested in a character, and Rebecca Berto has done this, and then some. She definitely has a bright future ahead for her books, and I will be first in line to read 'Pulling Me Under'. I would give this more stars if I could.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted January 8, 2013

    Mental illness is never pretty, and Precise does not gloss over

    Mental illness is never pretty, and Precise does not gloss over it. The story moves along slowly as it draws out scenes that depict the toxic attitude that a mother has on her only child.

    The author skillfully makes the reader feel disjointed by the stream of consciousness style and the episodic nature of the chapters. She takes common scenarios, a Scrabble game, a trip to the park, and imbues horror elements into it with the stalking mother.

    Kate tries to resolve her issues, but as in parental abuse cases, the parent's power is too strong. The father is ineffective in reining in his wife, and everyone else is perplexed because her mother seems so calm on the surface. Yet she undermines Kate's spirit so much I'm not sure Kate can ever break free. I don't expect her problems to be solved in such a short novella. That would have been a cheap way out.

    This story was not meant to be enjoyed, but meant to make you think. Kudos to Rebecca Berto on a successful debut.

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