Ralph Tells a Story
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Ralph Tells a Story

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by Abby Hanlon
     
 

Nothing ever happens to Ralph. So every day when it’s time to write stories, Ralph thinks really hard. He stares at his paper. He stares at the ceiling. But he has no stories! With the help of his classmates, Ralph realizes that a great story can be about something very little . . . and that maybe he really does have some stories to tell. Debut…  See more details below

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Nothing ever happens to Ralph. So every day when it’s time to write stories, Ralph thinks really hard. He stares at his paper. He stares at the ceiling. But he has no stories! With the help of his classmates, Ralph realizes that a great story can be about something very little . . . and that maybe he really does have some stories to tell. Debut author/illustrator Abby Hanlon’s endearing text and charming watercolor and colored pencil illustrations prove that writing can be fun!

Editorial Reviews

Publishers Weekly
"Stories are everywhere!" exclaims Ralph's teacher, and Hanlon proves it in her debut picture book. While Ralph's classmates eagerly scribble stories, he displays his creativity by finding excuses to leave the room. When Ralph complains that he can't write a story because "NOTHING happens to me," his friend Daisy replies, "Are you kidding?... I've written a ton of stories about you!" (one describes Ralph's nail-painting adventure: "then the teechr sed oooo no its prmanent marker!"). Eventually, Ralph finds inspiration in a memory of an encounter with an inchworm, and when it comes time to share his story, Ralph's classmates' questions prompt him to wildly embellish it, emphasizing the value of oral storytelling. Hanlon's loose, rudimentary watercolor and colored pencil cartoons are as authentically childlike as Ralph's voice; literary lions like Olivia and Babar decorate the walls of Ralph's classroom, speech bubbles provide humorous asides, and Ralph's wide, craggy line of a mouth easily conveys frustration, anger, nervousness, and confidence. A closing lineup of staple-bound books, among them When Milk Came Out of My Nose and The Smelly Band-Aid, prove that Ralph has left his writer's block behind. Ages 5–9. (Sept.)
Children's Literature - Mary Hynes-Berry
All the classrooms that are using Lucy Caulkins' Writers' Workshop approach are likely to see that Ralph's teacher is one of their number. They probably have several "Ralph's" in their group who find it hard to know what to write about, even though other children seem to find something interesting. In this case, after lots of looking and help-seeking, Ralph realizes that a simple statement like "I was at the park. An inchworm crawled on my knee" can raise a lot of questions that lead a great "small moment" story that includes about the earthworm ending up and then escaping a baby's diaper. The illustrations are done in the style of Diary of Wimpy Kid, that adults somehow believe look like real kids' drawings. (It doesn't really.) Nor do I think this well-meaning book is likely to truly inspire a reluctant writer on its own—the inchworm in the diaper is obviously the work of an imaginative mind, who can get by with a "potty mouth" detail about diapers. It might be interesting, however, to have an open discussion after this read-aloud that asks the children themselves about how they relate to Ralph's experience. Or maybe the thing to do is to provide a story-starter like "An inchworm crawled on my knee..." and challenge everyone to come up with their own original extension. Reviewer: Mary Hynes-Berry
Kirkus Reviews
With a little help from his audience, a young storyteller gets over a solid case of writer's block in this engaging debut. Despite the (sometimes creatively spelled) examples produced by all his classmates and the teacher's assertion that "Stories are everywhere!" Ralph can't get past putting his name at the top of his paper. One day, lying under the desk in despair, he remembers finding an inchworm in the park. That's all he has, though, until his classmates' questions--"Did it feel squishy?" "Did your mom let you keep it?" "Did you name it?"--open the floodgates for a rousing yarn featuring an interloping toddler, a broad comic turn and a dramatic rescue. Hanlon illustrates the episode with childlike scenes done in transparent colors, featuring friendly-looking children with big smiles and widely spaced button eyes. The narrative text is printed in standard type, but the children's dialogue is rendered in hand-lettered printing within speech balloons. The episode is enhanced with a page of elementary writing tips and the tantalizing titles of his many subsequent stories ("When I Ate Too Much Spaghetti," "The Scariest Hamster," "When the Librarian Yelled Really Loud at Me," etc.) on the back endpapers. An engaging mix of gentle behavior modeling and inventive story ideas that may well provide just the push needed to get some budding young writers off and running. (Picture book. 6-8)

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Product Details

ISBN-13:
9780761461807
Publisher:
Amazon Childrens Publishing
Publication date:
09/18/2012
Pages:
1
Sales rank:
67,586
Product dimensions:
8.10(w) x 10.30(h) x 0.30(d)
Lexile:
330L (what's this?)
Age Range:
6 - 8 Years

Meet the Author

Abby Hanlon has a master’s degree in early childhood education from the City College of New York and bachelor’s from Barnard College. Abby has taught creative writing and first grade in the New York City public school system. Inspired by her student’s storytelling and drawings, Abby began to write her own stories for children. Determined to illustrate her stories, Abby taught herself to draw after not having drawn since childhood. Ralph Tells A Story is her first book. Abby lives in Brooklyn, New York, with her husband and her two children. Learn more about the author: www.abbyhanlon.com

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