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prissy58
Posted July 2, 2010
this was supposed to b a BOOK dont a preview. waste of my time!
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Posted August 24, 2011
Revenge, laced with sex, is a delicious plot device. Brewster has given us just a taste here, leaving us drooling for more. JMax
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Posted August 15, 2011
The book was just starting to get good and it was at the end...I wanted to find out more about the night she had planned for the both of them.
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Posted June 29, 2011
Too short but very good, I just wished it was longer.
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Overview
The original premise was twofold.One was to write a story entirely in dialogue without attribution. This seemed to have put readers off. Some could not follow the thread. Others found the grammatical errors and syntax errors especially off-putting.
This comes with the territory when writing dialogue. No one speaks grammatically correct in plain conversation, especially in a heated argument, and syntax is often the first and foremost casualty.
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