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Posted January 12, 2011
Posted January 11, 2011
This story has a great background to it. But the writing was choppy. All of a sudden the author was on another thought & I had to go back a page to make sure I didn't skip a page! Also, I don't know if it is because I downloaded this book to my e reader or if the book was actually edited by a first grader, but this book had more spelling erros than my six year olds homeowork! And the misuse of some words was amazing!
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Posted November 5, 2012
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